Everlasting Love

A Valentine's Day poem..

I've long been lost in the curves of the waves
My soul trapped in the foam coming to shore
Back and up and back again
Until the day I was sad no more

Purest petals
Of the whitest rose
Crystal center
Thy diamond gold

Your angel wings swooped me up
And lifted me above the clouds
So I could see the world more clearly
As I looked deep deep down

My heart ebbs
With your complete flow
My whitest rose
Purest diamond

Your yellow halo brushed with gold
Lighting up the darkest night
Shining brighter than the giant sun
Saving us from all the frights

My crescent moon
Always shining
Be always near
For you are my sky

Wave your banner signs of peace
Hold them up while soaring by
Show them to the whole wide world
Let them see the message fly

Lifting my heart
Forever High

Guardian angel of mine
Oh how I love you so
Your heart loving, face so tender and sweet
How I mustn't let you go

And to all the other fish lost among the sea
Know that God will lead you home
Your angel too shall save you
From the vast waters you roam

Author's Note

The poems were originally separate (one by me and one by Literary Artist Dream), but I combined them to better display the love and emotions felt. I hope you enjoyed it!

Reviews

[Sindu]

I feel light reading your poems.. Simple words yet subtle writing
Incredible emotions in this one.

[Cool Girl]

Thanks, Sindu!! I really appreciate your kindness :)

[Tanner Kutchman]

Reminds me of love i have felt, nearly brought a tear upon my cheek.

[Cool Girl]

oh I'm so glad you liked it :)
Thank you so much for kindly reading!

[Tanner Kutchman]

You are very welcome. It would be great if you could read my first to poems i would love that. Thank you

[Cool Girl]

I'll be sure to read them as soon as I can! I'm falling behind on some of my read request..

[Tanner Kutchman]

No problem, Thank you

[Warren Daniel II]

These lines were simply golden " Your yellow halo brushed with gold
Lighting up the darkest night
Shining brighter than the giant sun
Saving us from all the frights" I really enjoyed this poem.

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so very much, my friend!

[Not here]

By like it, I mean this is a really great poem and you are an extremely talented writer :)

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much, David! I really appreciate it :)

[Ethan Brill]

This poem reminds me of my mother. I love it.

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much, Ethan!

[AaronFreitas]

Very beautiful poem Cool Girl! I really enjoyed it. I am extremely thankful for my guardian angel as she has saved my life several times :)

[Cool Girl]

That's really cool! Thanks so much for reviewing :)

[Emily]

I love how you word everything!
Keep it up!!

[Cool Girl]

Thank you, Emily!
Sorry for not reviewing your work very quickly, I'm falling behind on read requests..
I will read them eventually though! I promise :)

[Emily]

It's ok don't feel bad. I have had my share falling behind on read request. I've had them all the way up to 600 beofore! Just get to them when you can!

[Cool Girl]

Thanks for understanding! :)

[JC]

this is epic, an incredibly beautiful poem of angelic imagery and feeling.

[Cool Girl]

Awe, thank you :)

[SmittyJas]

Enjoy It Well for once I am floored by such a loving and charming poem of God gracing Angels to come in the nick of time to save us from the abyss of the ocean blue. Enjoyed this spiritual poem giving all glory to God the creator and the Spiritual beings only God could have created in the beginning. Well Written Poem Keep up the good works.

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so very much, Smitty!!

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

This was great Sis! Fantastic Job. I like the pic, too. I used the very same one for one of my poems. Lol.
Anways, great use of wording, no wonder you won a contest!

[Cool Girl]

Haha, thanks! We used the same pic? Lol (signs that we are twins)

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

See, there are so many signs.. lol