Everlasting Love

A Valentine's Day poem..

I've long been lost in the curves of the waves
My soul trapped in the foam coming to shore
Back and up and back again
Until the day I was sad no more

Purest petals
Of the whitest rose
Crystal center
Thy diamond gold

Your angel wings swooped me up
And lifted me above the clouds
So I could see the world more clearly
As I looked deep deep down

My heart ebbs
With your complete flow
My whitest rose
Purest diamond

Your yellow halo brushed with gold
Lighting up the darkest night
Shining brighter than the giant sun
Saving us from all the frights

My crescent moon
Always shining
Be always near
For you are my sky

Wave your banner signs of peace
Hold them up while soaring by
Show them to the whole wide world
Let them see the message fly

Lifting my heart
Forever High

Guardian angel of mine
Oh how I love you so
Your heart loving, face so tender and sweet
How I mustn't let you go

And to all the other fish lost among the sea
Know that God will lead you home
Your angel too shall save you
From the vast waters you roam

Author's Note

The poems were originally separate (one by me and one by Literary Artist Dream), but I combined them to better display the love and emotions felt. I hope you enjoyed it!

Reviews

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Wow... amazing! Just what I needed to read!

Cool Girl, you have the greatest talent in writing poetry! I just loved this poem!

[Cool Girl]

I am so glad that you enjoy my writing! I appreciate your kind reviews :)

[Natureislelove]

Very wonderful piece. felt the emotions and was touched by it. I think it was beautifully pieced together.

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much!! :)

[Shivalik Kalsotra]

very heart touching...it,s like u arranged the best pearls to make garland of love shinning with your pure emotions...

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much for your wonderful comment!! :)

[Demii]

I completely agree with Shane, its really calm and soothing, I love the difference between the two poems but the way it goes together is so perfect, good job!

[Cool Girl]

Thanks so much, Demii!! I really appreciate it :)

[~]

A love all of us want to have. Something that is more than just mere feelings, but will last long and will make us smile and be happy.

[Cool Girl]

Greetings! Thanks for commenting :)

[Shane Mohamed]

It's a good poem of salvation and self-deliverance. The constant reference of the angel left a mellow touch to the reader. It was comforting and soothing. The piece mentions love in an inspirational manner. Great write. Thanks for sharing.

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much!!

[Valentine]

Every one has a guarding angel if they would only stop to see and feel them. Nice write. Kathie

[Cool Girl]

Yes indeed!
Thank you so much :)

[Satan]

This is truly something special =]

[Cool Girl]

Thank you :).

[Roshan Nair]

A great write! the emotions of valentines day are loaded up pretty tightly into this piece and they come through with so much ease! Really nice poem, the flow was great, the structure even better. cheers! :)

[Cool Girl]

thanks so much!!

[Louisa-Msiska]

I wish I could write poetry as good as this. I love how the love was displayed, something so unique which makes those that haven't felt it to give a chance at it. This is perfect.

[Cool Girl]

Thanks :)