Dream a Better Dream

You picture me as a rose,
A white rose with petals that sparkle and shine even in the darkness.

You see me as an angel,
An angel with magnificent wings and a halo that shines as bright as the sun.

You adore me with all your heart.
Your eyes take in my beauty,
From dark hair to red lips.

You dream of listening to my harmony,
As I sing a beautiful song.

You'd write about me every minute of every day.
For I am your passion,
Yet you can't find strong enough words that could express your feelings for me.

You feel a connection somehow,
Attempting to piece together this puzzle of love.

Author's Note

More love poems xD

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

This is a love connection if you can read between the lines. Ha ha Just pulling your leg. Great poetry

[Cool Girl]

Thanks, Smitty!

[Jetta Zippora]

Love poems are awesome and fun to write. :) I really enjoyed reading this one. Keep on writing, friend!

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much, Jetta! I hope you keep writing too :)

[Roshan Nair]

Nice write! there is such simplistic beauty to this one, the interpretation of love and how it feels as we try making sense of it, the tries taking all our energy and sense but remaining mysterious still. Loved it! great work :) cheers

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so very much! I hope you have an awesome day :)

[Tania]

Solely beautiful ........

[Cool Girl]

Thank you :)

[TheLostMind]

"Yet you can't find strong enough words that could express your feelings for me." - Somethings can never be expressed by mere words. Love is one of them. It has to be felt, mutually.

"You feel a connection somehow,
Attempting to piece together this puzzle of love. " - I actually find it both intriguing and amusing when you say love is a puzzle. I have to agree, love is indeed a puzzle. If all the pieces fall in place, you will have a smile on your face. If they don't- a tear.

A really good write :)

[Cool Girl]

You are absolutely correct :)
Thank you, my friend!

[TheLostMind]

You are welcome :)

[Sindu]

Such simplicity and beauty. Love is a puzzle that keeps entangling our lives all the time :)
Liked this interpretation of yours, cool girl.

[Cool Girl]

thanks so much, Sindu!

[AaronFreitas]

Love poems are always exciting... especially to see the way you interpret love and how you feel... great job

[Cool Girl]

Thank you, Aaron :)

[Valentine]

Dream on....life is a lot more than just dreams. You have to do something positive to get their attention. Valentine

[Cool Girl]

Very true, my friend.
Thank you!

[B-poet]

This is a deep infatuation for a love that's hard to express in terms of the admirer. Loved the sentimental eloquence all throughout this poem. Great work Cool Girl. A mesmerizing write. :)

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much! I'm very glad that you enjoyed it :)

[dan]

Cool Girl, I am going to say yes to the friend request, of course, but I wanted to read something of yours first. I really like this piece for the unabashed love that's evident throughout the write. Your presentation, like the extra-long sentences periodically, grabs at the eyes as it's touching your heart. Thanks for sharing with all of us. take care...dan

[Cool Girl]

thank you so much for reviewing! I am so glad that you are going to accept my request! I'll be sure to read something of yours as soon as I can (have to catch up on read requests). Best wishes :)

[dan]

Looking forward to it. It was my pleasure reviewing this piece. Thank you. take care...dan