I Like You

I like you
I can't bring myself to tell

We only met a few months ago
And yet I know you so well

The way you talk to me
My heart begins to flutter

The way you cheer me up
I know there is no other

You speak of finding love
I wish that you could see

I am right here
Wanting you with me

I cannot determine what you feel
But I wish the feeling were love

I pray for God to help me
From the Heavens up above

It's what's on the inside that counts
I know you have a kind heart

You look good on the outside too
Your hair sparkles in the sun

I really really like you
I needed you to know

Don't let it ruin our frienship
It's as beautiful as a dove

Author's Note

I hope you liked it!

Reviews

[Matthew James Ginn]

Impressed with the great way you can translate our inner feelings of desire for someone we want to be with. The reality of our dreams is in front of us, we want to grab it but it may crumble in our hands. Beautiful poem.

[Cool Girl]

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review my work:)

[Matthew James Ginn]

no problem

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words and thoughts.
"Don't let it ruin our frienship
It's as beautiful as a dove"
The statements in the poem. Honest and direct. Left reader with vision of something too beautiful to behold and touch. I liked the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

I really love your poetry. The way you write selflessness ,lost in love , true and fresh feelings with rhythms! amazing job!

[Cool Girl]

Thanks so much, ReD. It means a lot coming from you, my friend. Still, I always feel like a celebrity after reading your reviews. Thanks again:)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Haha pleasure !

[Nessie_AJ]

Definitely very relatable, how one person can become so much in a short period of time and changing us forever. Good piece, but try to go a little deeper into your feelings next time.

[Cool Girl]

Thanks for reviewing!! :)

[Mark]

the whisperings of a longing heart, and i must ask, why does acknowledgment of love risk friendship, (I know it does) but why? I wonder about all the people who let the possibility pass due to fear and insecurity… it’s a sad tale, I say all in!! it’s worth the gamble
Thank you for posting Cool Girl, I loved the flow and sentiment behind this one :)

[Cool Girl]

Thank you. I believe it ruins friendship because it could get awkward if they don't feel the same way towards you. Thanks again for the kind review! Have a great day:)

[Tiana]

This is such a beautifully written poem, Cool Girl. This is exactly the way it started for me and the love of my life now. That wonderful friendship with a strong attraction ... It took us a few years to submit to those feelings and how we wish we knew sooner ... Loved your poem!

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much!

[Tiana]

Your are so welcome :)

[Emily]

What a nice meaning!
Well done!!

[Cool Girl]

Thank you :)

[Moonlight]

Aww!! Such an adorable poem you have written there CG! It is something many can relate to... Really, Great work! I really enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing.. :)

[Cool Girl]

Thanks, Moonlight!!

[Moonlight]

You are welcome! :)

[anonymous]

Aww! This is really cute great job!

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much!

[Lizardo]

This is tremendously a awesome poem and I felt this a long time ago... When I was still studying in the U.S.
The meaning of this poem really goes to my heart, it's beautiful and elegant.
I do enjoy this a lo Aless, This is one great and awesome poem! :)

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much..
Im sorry that it didnt work out for you in the U.S.
But still, thanks for everything! :)