I Love You

Another love poem...

I don't know what to say,
Your words take my breath away.

All I can do is smile,
To thank you for being here a while.

Laugh,
Sing,
I'll be right there with you.

Tell,
Me,
How you feel.

And I could tell you that,
I'm in love with you.
Oh I could tell you that,
I'm in love with you.
So tell me if you love me too,
I promise that my love is true.

Show me where to go,
Cause trust me, I don't know.

All I can do is stand still,
And look at you, how beautiful you are.

Guide,
Me,
I would follow you anywhere.

Just tell,
Me,
How you feel.

And I could tell you that,
I'm in love with you.
Oh I could tell you that,
I'm in love with you.
So tell me if you love me too,
I promise that my love is true.

Yes,
I know that I fall in love too easily.

But I know,
That what I feel is real.

If you could just tell me,
Show me,
How you feel.

So I could tell you that,
I'm in love with you.
Oh I could tell you that,
I'm in love with you.
So tell me if you love me too,
I promise that my love is true.

Author's Note

I hope you enjoyed this one!

Reviews

[Moonlight]

Seems like a song! It is really beautiful... It portrays that true love that I have read about in books...
Each word in this piece is resounding with the love of the writer. Beautiful work! Thanks for sharing! :)

[Cool Girl]

Thanks so much Moonlight! I always enjoy reading your work and reviews xD

[Emily]

I love the first lines!
Keep it up!!

[Cool Girl]

Thanks, emily!

[Rene Salinas]

I came, although hesitantly. I have issues with love poems in general Cool. After 22 years of marriage I haven't got anything resembling this feelings. I'm just not the romantic type and this writings always make me feel as if I should apologize. It is however a refreshing thing to see them in you. It is somewhat naive, and untouched, pure of heart even. It slowly transforms into something else but to see you are feeling the levity the embracing and the kind nature of love is uplifting to say the least.

I hope it is reciprocated.

Thank you for the invite.

[Cool Girl]

Wow, thanks so much, Rene! It means a lot coming from you:)

[Stephen]

I really liked this poem! I have someone that I love and sometimes I doubt that they know it, or I sometimes doubt that they have it in return. So this poem is definitely something I can relate to. Glad you shared it

[Cool Girl]

Thanks! I hope all works out for you:)

[Stephen]

No problem, friend, I always love your writing.

[Cool Girl]

haha, thanks again:)

[Lizardo]

Ah this one great beautiful poem!
I think that's how we all feel when we really love someone..
This one amazin piece of poetry,I really loved it!
Great work on this one CG :)

[Cool Girl]

Haha, thanks so much!