I Love You

Another love poem...

I don't know what to say,
Your words take my breath away.

All I can do is smile,
To thank you for being here a while.

Laugh,
Sing,
I'll be right there with you.

Tell,
Me,
How you feel.

And I could tell you that,
I'm in love with you.
Oh I could tell you that,
I'm in love with you.
So tell me if you love me too,
I promise that my love is true.

Show me where to go,
Cause trust me, I don't know.

All I can do is stand still,
And look at you, how beautiful you are.

Guide,
Me,
I would follow you anywhere.

Just tell,
Me,
How you feel.

And I could tell you that,
I'm in love with you.
Oh I could tell you that,
I'm in love with you.
So tell me if you love me too,
I promise that my love is true.

Yes,
I know that I fall in love too easily.

But I know,
That what I feel is real.

If you could just tell me,
Show me,
How you feel.

So I could tell you that,
I'm in love with you.
Oh I could tell you that,
I'm in love with you.
So tell me if you love me too,
I promise that my love is true.

Author's Note

I hope you enjoyed this one!

Reviews

[Katie]

Like always a wonderful poem and I love it!:) I love the way that you describe feelings. (sorry if that sounds weird)

[Cool Girl]

No, it doesn't sound weird lol
Thanks so much :)

[Jon Roggie]

I did enjoy this. Is that enough to tell? Many seem to share the love, and for each in a different manner. Now, what does that tell you?

[Cool Girl]

Haha yes..
Thank you so much, Jon! :)

[Chain of Hearts]

I love how it is so romantic! So many other poems I've read are every genre other than romantic, and really this is a beautiful, gentle piece.
Awesome!

[Cool Girl]

Thanks! I'm glad you like this :)

[Confuser]

Cool girl, I love it, but as a song. To me a line or two and I don't know if you like rap, but it is there! Just my thoughts. I feel a wonderful rhythum. Love it!!! Dale

[Pushkar Prabhat]

wow!!
very sweet lovely and romantic...........cuddly, sort of.
why wouldn't he tell you........... :)
i loved it........!!!!!
:)

[El Chico]

These words make you feel good, light of spirit...its like the day you first come home after kissing someone you secretly know you are going to love...the feeling you have before you fall asleep. Waking up the next day high on that first sweet memory always to remain perfect. Its beautiful. Thanks for sharing Cool Girl :)

[Cool Girl]

Very very true... You are very welcome. Thanks for reveiwing! :)

[Thayle L.]

although young, I've been in love with someone for a while. I'm just waiting for age. whenever I'm near, I just feel bubbly and perky and tons of other things. I hope I quote this right

Love isn't about finding the perfect person. it's about seeing the right flaws in an imperfect person.

[Cool Girl]

Thanks, Thayle. I hope all works out for you:)

[Daydreamer]

All lovers long for feeling secure in their partner's presence.... and I personally believe, it's one of the most prominent aspects of a good relationship to feel safe towards what you're heading to with your partner! It's all what we need😍
A very honest sentiment
and nice portray!💜

[Cool Girl]

Very true... Thanks for reviewing! :)

[Daydreamer]

Welcomee💕

[Essa]

loved this! got a little jingle to it too haha but its good!

[Cool Girl]

Haha, thanks so much!

[DoormanDan]

This is a sweet love poem, and I can easily imagine this being made into a great song! You've done an awesome job with this piece :)

[Cool Girl]

Thanks, Dan! You're amazing! :)