Within You

Another love poem...

Keep me in your heart
Keep me in your mind
Far apart
But our frienship still sparks every day

Wish upon a star
Wish with all your soul
The stars are like you looking back at me

Think now really hard
Think with all your might
Form with me a connection
A connection that lasts throughout time

So tell me with your words
Please try not to speak
The wind will carry your love
All the way to me

And nobody can make us break
Our hearts have already been broken
But you have saved me now

Sleep peacfully every night
Dream of a happy life
And maybe we can watch the moon arise
The same moon we can see from the other side...

Author's Note

I hope you enjoyed this!

Reviews

[jemaral]

A poetic goodnight.. Great job.. for the loved ones that are not within arms reach it speaks of the longing we feel for them as we prepare for the nights embrace.. consciously or unconsciously its something that we humans tend to do let our minds wander to that special someone who makes life more colorful.. This piece captured this phenomenon quite nicely..

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed :)

[Katie]

Another wonderful poem I really do enjoy reading your poems !:)

[Cool Girl]

Thanks, Katie. I really appreciate it :)

[closed]

Another great write Aless

-Dream

[Cool Girl]

Thanks so much!! :)

[Mary Bradley]

Heartfelt and alluring Poem ! Love and desire have their own minds that leave us baffled with yearning . So much so that we feel powerless to do anything about it ...

[Cool Girl]

Awe, thanks!! I really appreciate your kind words:)

[SheDragon16]

"This is so Good" I like how you can see this so many different ways you can see it from two best friends point of view or Maybe a long distance relationship or even a Loved one who passed away.

[Cool Girl]

Thanks you. I wanted to show that friendship or other relationships can last even if the people are far apart.

[Moonlight]

Beautiful poetry! And the last line...
" And maybe we can watch the moon arise
The same moon we can see from the other side..."................. I really love them. My favorite lines.
It's such a transparent poem. It reflects each emotion with such finesse. I truly loved. This is one of my favorites.... Amazing work! Thanks for sharing!:)

[Cool Girl]

Thanks so much for reviewing! You always review my work when I ask you to, so thanks for that. You are an amazing writer and friend:)

[Moonlight]

I should be thanking you for letting me read such amazing poetry that you write! :) But, Thanks a lot CG! :)

[Cool Girl]

Haha, you're welcome:)

[Elie Marie]

I love this. because home is on one side of the pond and I'm on the other and it is the same moon.

[Cool Girl]

Thanks, Elie. I'm glad you could relate.. :)

[Emily]

I love this poem! It kind of reminds me of my poem called 'Find The Heart'.
Keep It up!

[Cool Girl]

Thanks! :)

[Confuser]

This is just not "another poem" This is BRILLIANT!! I so love it, it flowed so perfectly. Wow, it built with grace and lovliness and it wonderful. Gotta say Wow again!

[Cool Girl]

Thanks so much! I'm really glad you liked it:)

[Confuser]

My favorite so far! Wow!

[Cool Girl]

Haha, thanks again :)

[Confuser]

Y/W...............Dale]]

[DoormanDan]

The first thing I have to say is that the last two lines are perfect. The atmosphere of this piece you've written is extremely appealing. With every poem you write, you manage to find a way to get even better with poetry. That is truly something impressive! :)

[Cool Girl]

Awwwe thanks so much, Dan! I really appreciate it:)