A Lover's Conversation

something random...

Good morning, my sunshine.

Buenos días, mi amor.

I've missed you for a long time.

Te extrañé mucho más.

Each night I pray for you to be safe.

Cada mañana rezo para que usted pueda estar conmigo.

Don't be afraid.

Toma mi mano. Usted será seguro.

I love you every day.



Buenas tardes, hermosa.

Good evening, my darling.

Sueño con tu cara.

And I dream of yours.

No me dejes.

I would never.

Quedarse.

Always.

Por favor.


Good night, my moon.

Buenas noches, mi estrella.

Sleep tight.

Dulces sueños.

What now?

No quiero decir adiós.

Don't say goodbye.

Hasta pronto.

See you soon.

Te quiero.

Forever.

Author's Note

Okay. This was a back and forth conversation. The part in English was the girl, and the part in Spanish was the guy. Originally I had the parts in different colors, but for some reason it wouldn't let me post it that way. Feel free to use a translator because that's what I did xD I hope you enjoyed it, and I do hope it wasn't too confusing. I just wanted to show that love can take place anywhere and can be felt by anyone...

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

The colors would have spoiled the noir effect of the poem This conversation could have taken place anywhere at anytime, colors would have made it sesame street material and unusable for all kinds of pictures.

[Cool Girl]

Haha... Well, im glad it didn't post with colors then. :)

[closed]

This is adorable Aless
lol

it's very original too

we should do this ^


-Dream

[Cool Girl]

Lol thank you! Yeah, we should.. :)

[Moonlight]

I used a translator for this one... just like you did! XD But, on a serious note, Yeah you have as usual truly captured my heart through your writing! Beautiful work there CG! I loved it. With each poem you post... it just keeps getting better! Amazing work and amazing originality! Thanks for sharing! :)

[Moonlight]

Oh and I might add, that the concept of love knowing no language, country or any boundaries of that sort.... is a very beautiful one! :)

[Cool Girl]

Thanks so much, Moonlight! Your words make me sound like a celebrity xD

[DoormanDan]

This most definitely an original poem! You know you're a good writer when you write something completely random(like you said you did with this piece) and still get something pretty good. Even though I'm not really bilingual, I really liked how you added Spanish every other line, it just adds more to the poem. Have a pack of imaginary strawberries for a job well done :)

[Cool Girl]

I LOVE strawberries!!! Haha, thanks :)

[DoormanDan]

who doesn't love strawberries? :)

[Cool Girl]

xD weird people maybe?

[Moonlight]

I second that thought CG! :P

[Lizardo]

Well, If you want to learn spanish then I can teach you xD
I really love the poem, it is very romantic
Really good CG! I enjoyed reading it :)

[Cool Girl]

Thanks so very much! Yeah, I took Spanish for 9 years, and I still can't speak the language! I started taking French this year xD

[Lizardo]

Hahahaha xD nice one xD

[Cool Girl]

Lol xD
Yeah...

[Stephen]

A beautiful conversation. I really like your style with adding in the different language to make it unique, I enjoyed the read. Thanks Friend

[Cool Girl]

Thanks so much:) and you're welcome!

[The Black Warrior]

Aww this is so sweet and elegant! I loved it Cool Girl. this is beautiful and very creative XD

Quedarse. is Quedate sweetie :D

Everything esta perfecto :DDD

[Cool Girl]

Gracias! :)

[The Black Warrior]

De nada, es un placer :DD