Iveltac

This is a poem/song about a good friend of mine...

A great friend
Is what you are
Absolutely hilarious
Oh oh oh
I never want to lose you
Oh oh oh
Don't go

Everything
You do
Makes me want to smile

So
Rainbows and sunshine
Bunnies and telling time
These are the things about you and me

Role play and dorky things
Laughter is all we need
These are the things about you and me
You and me

A fun guy
Is what you are
Simply interesting and awkward
Oh oh oh
It's better that way
Oh oh oh
Please do stay

Everything
You do
Makes me want to smile

Food is delicious
Root beer and pizza
These are the things about you and me

Killing rabbits
Depressing
At least I think
These are the things about you and me
You and me

Oh oh oh
Oh oh oh
Everything we do
I think it's a pretty great friendship
Oh oh oh
Oh oh oh
This is who we are
We will never change for anyone because

Everything
You do
Makes me smile.... :)

Author's Note

Hey! I really hope you enjoyed this piece. It was a bit different from what I normally write, but Iveltac inspired me to try something like this. And that is why this piece is about him:)

Reviews

[Stephen]

This is awesome. I could use this poem to describe a friend I have. Its the best kind of friend that you can have, one that always makes you smile.

[Cool Girl]

Yes indeed:) Thanks so much, Stephen!

[DoormanDan]

This is a very sweet poem. You wrote it very well, and the oh oh oh really helped me imagine a beat to this poem. I'm sure Iveltac loves this poem :)

[Cool Girl]

Thanks so much, Dan! I'm glad you like it:)

[Elie Marie]

this is really fun and happy. rare in poems but always good to read.

[Cool Girl]

Thank you. I was going for a fun and happy feeling because my friend is fun and happy!

[Moonlight]

Hey! It is really crazy poem with a lot of fun in it! And more than anything, it is an awesome tribute to your friend! :)

[Cool Girl]

Haha, thanks so much! I admit that it was super fun to write this poem:)

[Confuser]

It was very sweet and lovely. Thank you so much. Keep writing.

[Cool Girl]

Thanks so much, you are very welcome, and I will never stop writing:)

[Confuser]

Smart girl!!!!

[RileyRedding]

What corky brain of charm you put on display here.

A lovely tribute.

[iveltac]

:p yep. some times she becomes crazy.:p she must have been drunk to write a poem about me. Rolf. lol

[Cool Girl]

Thanks so much, Riley! Yeah I guess drinking so much root beer made that happen, Iveltac :p

[iveltac]

:p lol that was roleplaying lol

[Cool Girl]

yes.. :) :)

[Lizardo]

And I'm not suprise because he's pieces are freaking awesome!
This poem is really good, a lovely poem for him
Very good poem!

[Cool Girl]

Haha, Thx Lizardo:)

[Matching Socks]

Lovely tribute to your friend cool girl. Great to be inspired by others. :)

[Cool Girl]

Thanks so much!

[iveltac]

Great poem:p. lol my favorite part was the root beer and pizza. rolf (Rolf on Laughing Floor).

[Cool Girl]

Haha:) thanks!

[iveltac]

now i have to write a poem about you:p

[Lenah Mehzabin]

hey thanku thank u thank uuu so much for this poem ..Gosh it relates with me a lot especially here in cafe's site ; ) thank u girl exact words for my best friend !!

[Cool Girl]

You are very welcome! Thanks for the reveiw:)

[iveltac]

:p lol a poem about me.