I Don't Know

I Don't Know

A Poem by Cool Girl
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I have no idea what the heck this is...

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There's a fire in your heart
There's a fire in your soul
There's a fire in your eyes
And a story left untold
If you want to hear the story
Then you better listen up
And you better hold on
Because it's going to get rough.

© 2015 Cool Girl


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Cool Girl
I have no idea....

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nice short poem carrying great message...well penned

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cool Girl

9 Years Ago

Thank you! )
A message so important,
delivered in just a few lines...

That's how i felt about the piece. Great work! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Cool Girl

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much, you are very kind!
Moonlight

10 Years Ago

your welcome. :)
well though i can't tell you whay it is.......but believe me it is so beautiful!!!!
loved it!!!
:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Cool Girl

10 Years Ago

Haha, thanks so much!
Pushkar Prabhat

10 Years Ago

you are welcome!! :) :)
I'd say this would be a good mantra to repeat to yourself every morning. You know, one of those things you repeat to yourself in the mirror before you leave to go to work or school. A message that reminds you of the best qualities in yourself so you can master the day. Maybe I'm just reading a little it far into the motivating core of this poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Cool Girl

10 Years Ago

Haha, I do like your opinion! Thanks for reviewing!
I absolutely adore this. This is how I feel about the last few years of my life. So rough, so worth it. Great poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Cool Girl

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much!
I'm not quite sure what it is either but it sounds awful good. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Cool Girl

10 Years Ago

Thanks! :)
....so you gotta stay strong. I'm adding more on your small but lovely masterpiece. Quite nice. Thank you.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Cool Girl

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much! :)
Confuser

10 Years Ago

Y/W........................great writing.
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sweet,like other reviewer said could be the start of a longer piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Cool Girl

10 Years Ago

Thanks! :)
I would think that this is the beginning of a story
Other than that it is pretty good, I like the opening lines

Posted 10 Years Ago


Cool Girl

10 Years Ago

Thanks, I wrote it at like 3:00 in the morning xD
Lizardo

10 Years Ago

hahaha you are welcome

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Added on January 3, 2015
Last Updated on January 3, 2015
Tags: Story, fire, soul, heart

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