Rain

This is a short poem about rain!

Rain rain dripping down,
Never seems to touch the ground.
Drip drop it would say,
Come again another day.
Rain rain please don't go,
I love to see you drop and flow.

Reviews

[Jamestown]

Short, sweet and beautiful, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Cool Girl]

Thank you!!

[wordman]

well you could write a book about rain and not cover it all
but your short write explains it perfectly

[Cool Girl]

Thank you, wordman!

[wordman]

you are welcome cool girl

[Lizardo]

So this is the one that started it all...
and I must say you haven't changed in your writing, even from here, it's nice and elegant
I'm in love with the last line
''I love to see you drop and flow''
The first one, I did enjoyed this a lot :)

[Cool Girl]

Haha, thanks. :)
Seems like I wrote this a while ago..
I think I've improved a lot xD

[Lizardo]

You are welcome and I think you haved xD

[Cool Girl]

Haha, thanks again:)