My love

My love

A Poem by Andria Peterson

My love
Wraps around you like the warmest hug.

My love
Is what helps keep you snug.

My love
Transcends time and space.

My love
Is a warm embrace.

My love
Is always there.

My love
I always care.

© 2024 Andria Peterson


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Sweet love poem, Chixo. 💛

Posted 9 Months Ago


Andria Peterson

9 Months Ago

Thank you, Anita ☺️
This sums up how long be should be and feel in a simple way that states the emotion clearly

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very moving statement of devotion here. I would suggest, however, that you drop the commas after the first lines of each couplet. It would make for a smoother delivery.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Andria Peterson

9 Months Ago

Thanks for your feedback. I considered it before but I'll edit now.
John the Baptist

9 Months Ago

To me, it looks a lot better now. The repetitive first lines carry the reader's eye very nicely.

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Added on February 15, 2024
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