Letter To Keira Knightley

Keira Knightley and Nicole Richie
Used to be nice and plumpy
and now they're both skinny and skrawny

Mary Kate and Ashley Olson
Used to be so wholesome
and now the wind can blow them

What is happening to today's world?
When every child want's to be a skinny girl?
They eat a lil food then want to hurl

Little girls look up to their stars
They want to be skinny just as they are
So they refuse to eat then starve

I had a girl that thought she was too fat
but her small blubber was fun to grab
but she didn't want to hear that

Spain made their models to gain some weight
To join the catwalk the girls have to eat cake
A whole chicken they just ate

If Marilyn Monroe was alive
she would not be a model
They will tell her to go away and not even bother

Too many girls want to be super thin
I don't want to make love to a stick
So each girl must look from within

Is your beauty worth dying for?
You are starting to look like Skelator
I hope you start eating some more

So this is my letter to Keira Knightley
I am asking very politely
My hopes on her gaining weight is unlikely

She is now just skin and bones
What is wrong with her skin tone?
She looks like a ghost

I mean what is wrong this?
She looked like she came from the abyss
Oh the old her how much I miss

Reviews

[Alicia]

This is great poem on a subject that not to many people touch on. It's such a tough thing for many girls, and it's sad to see so many young celebrities influencing other young girls to starve themselves as well. This was poem was simple and easy to read, with even a touch of irony and humor, which I think works well. It is such a dark subject... the humor brightens it up a bit and makes it easier for people to understand the truth about it. Thanks for writing this, it is refreshing to hear a male's perspective on the subject. (I don't know why I'm assuming you're a man, but I can't really tell since your name is "Notorious Reviewer", so if I'm wrong, I'm sorry and please correct me :D).

[Rei]

LOL!!! This was great!! A nice shot at the media world and its insane look on beauty! It is really sad that so many girls think that toothpick is pretty so they starve themselves and throw after meals. I agree! They should look at their inner beauty more!

[brittanyjane]

Sadly, this is so effin true. Kinda funny the way you said some things. I liked this one hehe. Good job!

[Maria Retz]

Oh wow, wow, wow

So true!

Wonderful and important.

I just LOVE this poem.

So true, so true

[Benarsi]

Incredible. You've written what everyone thinks.

Great read!

B.

[kevin walls]

yes, first its a point no one hears but needs to be heard and its presented in a poem that can stand on its own beyond the social message


very very nice

[Luke Brooks]

"Use to be nice and plumpy"
Should be used.

I agree completely.
All of them (plus Misha Barton and Lindsay Lohan and so many others) looked so much better before losing the weight.

Good message in this.
I hope even if it doesn't get to them someone will listen to it.

[Ebby]

I love that the pretty girls who like this poem are all skinny.

HA!

S**t review from me, but I couldn't resist.

[Erotic Goddess]

If Marilyn Monroe was alive she would not be a model They will tell her to go away and not even bother I adore Marilyn Monroe and she was so sexy! :)OH! This makes me feel so wonderful! I am a big girl and I love it! Thank you so much. It is wonderful and I adored the writing.

[Taja B.]

You don't know how much I agree with this! I agree that any people who want's to go really skinny isn't really the way to go. I mean, some of the stars that used to be so beautiful before they lost the weight, but now, they just look like skeletons that desparately need to eat! Why do many women want to go skinny now??? I don't get it. I really don't.

Well anyways, I really like this poem. It states a very important point and it's kind of funny also.
Great job on this.

[Antony]

Hey my friend, me like em robust, so much more to thrust. Great write Daniel, a big problem for todays women. I loved your comparison to Skelator, very funny.
Tony