Osama Is Dead

I wrote this one quick

Osama is dead
With a bullet to the head
A country divided
Is now united
We all can agree
We wanted that man deceased
All perished souls
can finally
rest in peace
Osama Bin Laden lived in a cave
He probably..... didn't even bathed
He must've stunk for days
He had bad breath
Which can put others to death
That a*****e
responsible for 9-11
Thinks he's in heaven
With 72 Virgins
But he is wrong
There's no
72 Virgins
It's 72 Harpies
And they all have herpes
So he's burning alright
That fucken coward
brought down the towers
But we are empowered
By the American Spirit
No a*****e can squash it
So today we won't forget
to the lives that have perished
by this mad man
Who is forever damned
He got shot in the face
Unfortunately
he will be replaced
by another nutjob
Why won't this war on terror
Just won't stop
It just will not
Osama Bin Laden
Didn't represent Islam
It was his
distorted vision
So bye bye Bin Laden
I hope you're loving hell
So hi to Hitler as well
For now we can rest
Becuz Bin Laden is dead

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

I would recommend breaking this up, making a few cosmetic fixes. Over all it is nice, but there need to be some breaks, it flows a little to widely.

[Coyote Poetry]

Bin Laden may be dead. I was a Soldier for 15 years. I went to six combat areas in this world. The enemy is the one standing with 150 thousand with no reason to be there in another country. What if a million enemy soldiers landed in the USA. Would the people fighting against the the Soldiers. Be terrorist or protecting their land? Time for men to discuss peace. With 400 thousand soldiers playing police man in active war zones. Time for religion sect war to be decided by their people. Can't teach the world to be USA. USA may not be perfect. But we do our best to live together without killing each other. Thank you for a excellent poem. Open the door to a long conversation.
Coyote