R Refusing to read bullshit poems E Engaging in useless dialogue A Annoying Readers with Crap D Dead-End Poetry
R Rather be slitting own's throat E Even contemplating death Q Questioning the existence of God U Useless Waste of time E Energy Depleted S Suicidal Thoughts T Trying to Lie and say its good S Sad But True
just reading through this poem and the controversy and the comments, i'd like to see what kind of person would get angry at this?
doesn't strike me as controversial enough to draw out protest,
just seems like a wee-bit pissed of rant, idk, i liked it, i agree with
all your reviewers below, serah is one of the rarest gems of WC imo,
very encouraging to all, and to be honest, i loved this poem really,
because of the originality and the hell raiser face is perfect,
epic pic for ---like---- a movie or something
im thinking to b, probably, a film director of horror and thrill adventure ^^
REFUSAL REQUEST shoulda bee named
and the ones who dont read requests ---well,..... dey eithers dont care and dont want to waist time for now..... i read request sometimes, but im not a true writer ready to write to what's instore, cuz i do hav a life than writtting. *Dont write that much anymore, i do other stuff like finish listing to my music and going out to meet ppl :)>
Haha.! you make me smile. I love this...mostly because I agree wholeheartedly. Sadly this is why i'm loathe to review a lot of the newer writers. It's nothing but a bunch of fanfiction and wannabe's who wouldn't know their voice if it drop kicked them in the face...okay i'm rambling...point is...i like this
Haha very nice sir. I agree whole-heartily. I also agree with Michael, it's definitely not controversial enough to bring about protest. Most people enjoy ticked off rants because we all have them, whether we like to admit it or not. I will say that in the second to last line "Trying to Lie and say its good" your "its" needs an apostrophe. Other than that, great job. Wonderful to read and the picture accompanying the poem is a great choice.
----------------the guy in the picture.... isn't it the Pope?
I think you should drop off the first letter of each line - I know you did it on purpose, but it reads a bit "pretentious" I think all those who don't get it - can just get f *****
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