Occupation First.....Love Second

Oh what do you do for a living?
Do you make a little or do you make a lot?
Do you live with your moms or your pops?
Or do you live in the basement and smoke pot?
Are you rich or are you not?
Are you a lawyer or work at a restaurant?
I think I love you I really do
But when is the rent due?
is your paycheck coming through?
I am hungry I need to eat
give me your food I give you my lust
how much love can we trust?
Do you make a lot of money?
Or do you live off  mommy?
Can you take care of yourself?
Can you take care of me?
What is your status?
Are you important?
Or are you impotent?
Oh nevermind forget about it
You don't make s**t
you have a good heart
well who gives a f**k
you're s**t out of luck
you can't make enough money for me
then we are not meant to be
Are you a star?
Are you going far?
Love is not enough
for me to be with you
You're not David Beckham
Occupation First....Love Second

Reviews

[DC Gentleman]

Awesome... whimsical and true. A persons money doesnt dispay the cotent of their characters.. Gresat write ..

[Avoiry]

Ha i love your david beckham wrap up . Love the topic and love how it's completely intertwined with the counter topic. Love and money , always comes down to stability but i admit i would hate to think one would have to support the other , make your own way and combine forces ! but until then it's all relevant . Love the humor very nice.

[Jeff Bresee]

Too Funny...too true. Those of self defining fortunes deserve the love they buy.

[cookie monster love <33]

harsh but well written

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

lol so some women feel ,, good one and nicely written .. not all women feel this way ... very nice satire

[bluessadmood]

oh this s so lovely really..
yes some could be so stupid and they say they are so realistic,ha ha
how much do you make..are you well of
but i am not a bank and i cant afford money
oh yes i understand you are talking the language of today
make me a star ,i want to live high up on top
could you afford it,if not then get lost..oh yes
its the sign of time..f**k romance ,its your pocket i am after
can you afford it..if not then get lost
but what that makes you in fact,do you know
only a w***e will look that way
and i dont like to be with one
how i always love the way of your thoughts
are you angry anyway..dont
winning the heart of a w***e in never a trophy,it should never be
i really loved this
lovely write..

[Gandré]

this picture is strange.. where is her body? and why do you allow women to ask you so many questions? Why don't you say "don't worry about it:" ?
Well so it goes - but there is also another life, spiritual life and intelligence. It is not always about THINGS and MATTER and POSSESSIONS. methinks. thanks goodness, we have a choice. I am sorry, you are suffering, obviously; at least the poem tells me.