Occupation First.....Love Second

Occupation First.....Love Second

A Poem by Crazy Cat Man

Oh what do you do for a living?
Do you make a little or do you make a lot?
Do you live with your moms or your pops?
Or do you live in the basement and smoke pot?
Are you rich or are you not?
Are you a lawyer or work at a restaurant?
I think I love you I really do
But when is the rent due?
is your paycheck coming through?
I am hungry I need to eat
give me your food I give you my lust
how much love can we trust?
Do you make a lot of money?
Or do you live off  mommy?
Can you take care of yourself?
Can you take care of me?
What is your status?
Are you important?
Or are you impotent?
Oh nevermind forget about it
You don't make s**t
you have a good heart
well who gives a f**k
you're s**t out of luck
you can't make enough money for me
then we are not meant to be
Are you a star?
Are you going far?
Love is not enough
for me to be with you
You're not David Beckham
Occupation First....Love Second

© 2010 Crazy Cat Man


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that's terrible. but its best to be best friends first. then see where things go after. :D ----mishel

Posted 12 Years Ago


That's harsh! But it was good write,, I like it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Excellent work here and one that is very true. I've heard this conversation a lot from those much younger than me lately.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Shittt dude. :s You been hitting the Catherine Cookson's a bit hard? It is true though, I considered my past relationships from that point of view then realised I'd rather be broke and in love :D Is there a favourite application on this site anymore?? :s

Wd,
Regards,
GBG x

Posted 13 Years Ago


:) :) ^_^

Posted 14 Years Ago


Lmao! This is sadly how society has become for many.. I enjoy my poor happy life, I wouldn't trade it for ignorance. Great write

Posted 14 Years Ago


:) (:

Posted 14 Years Ago


It's true, love can't buy money... ? ... or is that the other way around :P

Very cool write. It's hard to be in love, if you can't pay the bills.
Antonio :)


Posted 14 Years Ago


This reminds me of what relationships turn into now. Everyone feeds us this bullshit when were little, fairy tales and what not, about love. In the end no one really knows what love is about, but everyone can identify with the need for money.

Posted 14 Years Ago


The ending made me laugh out loud - thank you - I don't do that enough. Nice lesson Espresed here.


Posted 14 Years Ago



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