The Guyfriend

Another Twilight poem

The Guyfriend

The Guyfriend is every girl's Bestfriend
He is there to hold your hand
He is there to understand
He is there to listen to your crap
He will pretend to care
He will say 'there there'
when you start to cry
But deep down inside
He wants you to be his wife
Instead he lies
to be by your side
he makes many calls
but he doesn't have the balls
to ask you out on a date
too bad its too late
He made a mistake
by playing it safe
He keeps missing his chance
He should've asked you to the dance
Now he's crying at your wedding
he wished that it should've been him
instead of that prick
is what he thinks
so now he drinks
to forget the pain
he's going insane
he tattooed your name
and your to blame
You shouldn't have lead him on
but you turned him on
and now his mind is gone
what did he do wrong?
he didnt belong
so he's saying so long
to this cruel world
because you wouldn't be his girl
His is the guyfriend
Every girl's non-dream


Poor Mike Newton

Reviews

[NeverSurrender]

Aww. It's so sad for those kind of boys. All girls say they want a boy like that, while in fact they usually fall for the 'bad' boys.. Nice poem ^^

[misha]

wow, great job

[Brette Medb]

Sometimes all it takes is a word but when it's not spoken there is no way of ever knowing.

[Parker Pearl]

i boycott twilight.

[Knij Nagili]

very straightforward poem. i like it

[deeps]

I enjyed this write. I thought it was really well written

[bluessadmood]

yes this was nice..some men would play like that ,for they never know how to play
they start something and will do everything about it,they try hard in vein
they will go on and on hoping ,just they never know how to end it ,they never know the key to the thing
so they will cry at the end..some are like babies to start a game you should know how to end it
or you should never have started it at all..its kind of funny,but gives you a lesson..
lovely write..

[Rachel Koepke]

I liked it it flowed nicely and had a nice flow to it, at first I thought it would be Jacob. overall it was pretty awesome

[MiLk]

I also liked the flow, unpredictably predictable. You made good light of
a sad scenario I see again and again. I don't know s**t but I liked it a lot.

[MagiCrystal]

Very nice flow.. I like it.