Facebook Status Change

My poem on facebook status changes :)

In A Relationship
means you want to show off
that you're dating
and others are not

Single
means that you can't mingle
No one wants to date you
perhaps you are gay

It's complicated
means you're psychotic
You both need a tonic
instead of smoking  chronic

Engaged to
means you're telling the world
that you both will be together
forever and ever

Married To
means you're full of s**t
you just couldn't resist
to rub it in everyone's face

Divorced
means your pathetic
you're just trying to get sympathy
its not gonna work

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Haha this was funny. I liked this poem. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Inci]

nice write.......the topic itself is quite funny...the way you proceeded was nice

[Dead Angel]

lmao i love this, what a funny way to look at someone's status updates :P

[J.Black]

LOL this is funny, rhyming is kinda off but i don't give a crap! :)

[Mischa Keats]

This was an interesting concept, but I feel the rhyming muddles the meaning up a tad.

[Amberinoface]

this is amazing. you took all the options and turned it into a work of art.

[ettorney]

So cynical! LOL. I wonder if it would be possible for you to write the same thing only completely opposite. It would be an interesting exercise in juxtaposition to find the positive in each category. Maybe not as compelling but certainly interesting.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

lol so true ,, and funny ,, love those status messages too ,, lol
going to the mall to get a new swimsuit or some crap lol
gotta love facebook

[Patrica Alvarez]

Haha, i love it

[Last Lying Look]

haha! This was amazing!
I'd have to say this is my favorite part;
"It's complicated
means you're psychotic
You both need a tonic
instead of smoking chronic"
Sorry it took me so long to read& review.
I'm usually on my other account.
But anyways, great write!

-Elissa :)