A Lovely Kiss

My 2nd romantic poem.......sort of :P

Oh what a lovely kiss
how much do I miss
when we're not together
I miss you like the weather
when Spring doesn't come
We're stuck with s****y winter
I'd rather get a splinter
than deal with another blizzard
My love for you is intense
I can't take your absence
It's hard to practice abstinence
We should be making babies
Instead of dealing with rabies
My love is sincere
Please come back my dear
When you are not here
I watch You Tube clips
and stare at Shakira's hips
I'll promise to behave
I'll even start to shave
I'll be your slave
to love you forever
and I will never ever
put video games over you again
oh what a lovely kiss
now we are in eternal bliss

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

This is so nice ,kind of funny too..
i know she will always come first ,but could you keep that promise
to stay away from video games and watching Shakira s hips..ha ha
and to behave ,shave and be a slave..too much to ask,but she must be worth it
wont be that easy..ha ha
this was really nice to read
lovely write

[Glenn Davis]

Nice. Corny, witty, and cute. That is a hard promise to make about video games my friend. You have some guts!