GENTRIFICATION

G Getting the Minorities out
E Everyone Must Go
N No More Latinos
T  Totalitarian Power
R Replaced by Gringos
I   Insidious Defamation
F  Formation of Damnation
I   Irreverent Replacement
C Caucasion Explosion
A Amoral Reverence
T Trail of Tears
I   Isolation of Fears
O Obama can't save
N Negros are gone

Reviews

[headjunta]

Well written The Reviewer... your poem paints a vivid picture. It reminded me of this article I read a few months back.. Nothing is black and white and I don't presume to know what is right or wrong, but I am interested to find out more about Lance Freeman's Study...

http://nymag.com/news/intelligencer/62675/

[Mockingbird]

pretty cool acrostic. it kind of shows how hitler wanted to have a pure race, well maybe he wanted the white people to take back their 'land' and no one can save the ones being evicted soley on their ethnicity. compelling statement.

[Audrie]

This piece is impressive and strikes the heart of the disintegration of the heart, soul and spirit of the occupants of our planet. I grew up with a Germa/ French sister and an African American/French sister and I, myself am not certain of my ethnic mix. I have been the target of racism and have seen it many times while I was growing up. It's wierd, but every time I witness it happening, I'm always shocked, confused and speechless. My goal is to start making my voice heard when I am exposed to it - I need to be a part of the change and not a passive witness. Exceptional piece!

[Dj Golden]

Well it is a little strange to read. I can't tell if you are pro/anti in the beginning and it starts to feel anti by the end, but it looks like you ran outta room before you reached that point. Now that's just talking about the poem, if you include the picture then you definitely strike the message.

[DC Gentleman]

awesome work.. sounds like you visted DC recently.. great poem..

[Patrica Alvarez]

Very powerful

[Kairi_Lynn]

haha if that isn't the truth of it all, or better yet the truth of the world, I really enjoyed this piece, quite the read. Well done.

[Breezie Kae]

An acrostic actually done well??? XD Amazing.

[Brette Medb]

I liked how you set this up. It was very unique and it took mea minute to realize that you weren't being serious. Good work!

[Kayleen]

well at first i didnt know if you were going for satire or if you were serious because i have read a lot of rascist stuff, but once i figured out you must not be serious, pretty good! lol

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Ha! That's funny! I like this piece and I praise for writing this satire. I enjoy reading satires. ^^

I absolutely love how smoothly this piece flows. It has plenty of rhythm, and with this structure, it's a challenge you took on and succeeded. Great job!

Ironically Yours.