Your Beautiful Black Eyes

My first romantic poem and a tribute to women with black or brown eyes. :)

Staring into your black eyes
is like the comfort of night
lying in the bed
laughing at things that were said

We lay under the covers
 Ignoring the world above us
No one to cause us harm
As we sleep in each other's arms

In our lovenest cocoon
 We laugh like crazy bafoons
 Then we continue with the light kisses
Tonight you are my mistress

I love combing your hair
 with the tips of my finger
Then I touch your lips
with the tenderness of my kiss
 
Your Beautiful Black Eyes
Are staring at me with love
Your beautiful voluptuous thighs
Are tantalizing as a dove

My black eyed princess
the ultimate temptress
You're different from the rest
far from the darkness

Reviews

[Ama May Cooper]

A beutifully worded piece.. perhaps could do witha little more emotive imagery but very good all the same