Girls With Boyfriends

I'm sick of girls who already have boyfriends
i wasted a lot of time talking to them
If they had a boyfriend why didn't they say it?
Instead of leading me on with fake flirts

Why is it when I'm single I meet girls who are taken
Or when I'm taken, I meet girls who want to mingle?
These girls with boyfriends just like to linger
Makes me want to show them the finger

Being single for long surely does suck
These taken girls are pushing my luck
I feel totally and utterly stuck
I'm becoming angrier than Daffy Duck!

So if you're taken leave me alone
Just give me the number to your friend's cellphone
If she's married then i'll leave
if she has a fiance then i'm going to a cafe
Hopefully I'll find a single girl there

:P

Reviews

[Hannah Monttkomepy]

Ha I like it. I wouldn't know if it's realistic or not cause I'm not a guy but I have a feeling it is. I liked hthe rhythm that you gave to the poem . ( "I feel totally and utterly stuck I'm becoming angrier than Daffy Duck!"

[Brianna Brie]

Nice rant! Keep up the good work.

[octane143]

Lol sooo true! delivered in a very cynical tone. Do not fret my friend, it workd the same for us women looking for men! Love your writing as usual!

[cookie monster love <33]

nice

[Lauren Beth]

I thought it was very well written and enjoyable. A cute poem!

[V]

I liked the title.
It is kind of different take on: We always want that which we cannot have. I thought the ending was a bit abrupt, maybe you meant it to be.
Thanks for sharing it.
V.

[Sianna Reader]

lol. Great poem.
These kind of experiences will probably always be lurking around the corner, when you're not looking for love because you're in a steady relationship, love is looking for you but when you're looking for love its not looking for you. This is just the cruel hand of fate. Ironic even.

I enjoyed this poem very much, comical and so very true.
Great read! xx

[Nathan Noble]

hah great idea and an awesome write!

[Clouded in Hopeful Illu..]

This was a good theme to work on for a piece, but I kind of wanted to see more as to why you hated these girls so much. Is it only because they flash you a smile and look your way? Maybe you could go into more detail about the experiences or ways that these girls have treated your speaker.

Also, one thing that threw me off a little is your first stanza. All the other stanzas have such a strong rhyme scheme excpet the first one. It's the same with the last line of the last stanza. My suggestion is to either make the first stanza rhyme or loosen up on the strong rhyme for the rest of the poem.

I really love the line about getting the number of a friend. I think that really shows just how much your speaker has had with these girls that piss him off so much.

[Stacy A. Foster]

hahaha bad experience lately? :)