Mind Of A Zombie

I am a living Zombie
My mind was never mine
My heart is cold, I do what I'm told
I follow directions with no questions
I follow trends with no end
I go to work I have no friends
I am married and my wife hates me
I watch movies and clip coupons
I buy groceries and even tampons
I am not alive I am dead
I am a Zombie till the end

Reviews

[Bethany Woody]

Okay first Resident Evil kicks some major a*s. I wish I had a PS3 just so I could play RE5, till then I will love my PS2 and RE4.
I like the concept of being a living zombie. It's very imaginitive and I'm sure there are many people out there who can relate to feeling this way. Most of us call it being in a rut.

[DC Gentleman]

This brilliant.. I wonder how many lives mundane lives.. life is to be cherished and savored...

Excellent work...

And I love Resident Evil by the way... LOL

[Gheeneil]

You have weaved a vivid imagery of a dormant life. This may be simple and short yet it is written just perfectly. Well-crafted!

[Gandré]

ha, well those zombies live under us, desperated and they don*t know how to make themselves happy, so sad. Yes kids with a broken home often decide to marry early, and such a new task is too much for them, life is hard and you penned so well, once again. thanks for this.

[Stephanie]

You always get the strongest points across in such an effortless and smart way. It makes me sad that some people just follow trends and live their live from fad to fad. Great piece :)

[deeps]

I like this, very well said like ths picture as well. Cool

[Constance L. Hartwell]

There are a lot of mindless people who walk around like zombies. Following trends and not being themselves. Thanks for sharing.

[Tallulah]

Ok first that picture is epic. Next this poem was great. It had great flow and a message that is really deep when you think about it.

[rachel <3]

damn.....yeah thats all that i can say that the moment so..........yeah damn
:)