Pretty and Damaged

A poem about crazy pretty girls :)

She's a pretty and damaged girl

Everyone revolves around her world

She's a succubus in disguise

We believe in her lies

I thought she was in love with me

I guess it was not meant to be

She was in love with him

After she was done with me

I thought I was her savior

She wanted me to save her

She told me about her life

And how many times she cried

It made me feel sad

I wanted to be her dad

She said I was the only one

who made her feel as one

But she only wanted to have fun

Then afterwards we were done

She said the same thing to the next guy

I told him that its all lies

He cannot see the Succubus in disguise

I looked into his eyes

He's already under the spell

She gets away with it

because she's pretty as hell

She's a pretty and damaged girl

we revolve around her world

 

 

 

Author's Note

It's not a personal poem.

Reviews

[Lucky Me]

Nice pic to go w/ this. You never fail to have an eye for photos. :). I like this one. From the "damaged girl" s perspective let me say this: Yes we may be thought of as beautiful, and told we an rule the world, but sometimes, maybe just sometimes all we ever wanted was to be a child. To not be damaged. The sad part of this poem isn't the damaged girl. It is her inability to cope w/ her issues.

[Kimmee Jean]

I really like this one...i have seen so many girls like this it isnt funny but this is really just a way people are. Be it girls or some guys too. I really hope that people like this can heal and eventually have a healthy relationship with people not use them to make themselves feel better...its a shame

[jumbie's #1 fan]

this is great insight to girls that are pretty, but have so much going on under the surface. very good and well written!

[Clouded in Hopeful Illu..]

Personal or not, this is a very good poem that really does show how the prettiest of girls are the worst. If they have so much confidence, then they take everything for granted and it's harder than hell to break through to anyone around them and close to impossible to break through to them.

Good work. I feel like many people will be able to relate to this just like I have.

[.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.]

Kudos!!
I love this piece!!

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

fantastic piece of writing... i think in many aspects it is a reality for many people...

[Robert Luna]

Awe yes this is so true but at the same time we can not call ourselves victims because we as a society allow her to become what she is. If we were to spend the time to look beyond the outer shell of these people we would see they are all ugly on the inside and have no soul. Beauty has it cost and it is a matter that we allow them to be exactly what they are. Great piece with alot of wisdom and truth flowing with in.


Great Job!!!!!!

[octane143]

beautiful and so true...but it can also be Crazy guys with cute asses (wait! maybe I should write that one!)

[AlleyCat34]

True, so true. Great piece!

[Adela Muresan]

Gee, this piece makes me feel sorry for you guys; but then again I think you deserve it hehe just kidding :)).
Not a bad write, full of emotion and very realistic.

A.M.