Proper

A father expects

his daughter

to be proper

because shes a

w***e like

her mother

 

But he goes

and cheats

with another

so why doesn't

that bother?

 

A daughter hates

her mother

for having

muliple lovers

f*****g one

or the other

 

a son hates

his father

for being

a m**********r

so that

makes him

a sucker

 

a daughter

does not want

to be like

her mother

 

a son

does not want

to be like

his father

 

they both

learn and

prosper

and become

better mothers

and fathers.

 

Reviews

[SPINNING ON that dizzy ..]

These girls that go wild....well, you just never know - do you? This is considered some rite of passage... just different standards I guess. This poem is a riot - I like the feel of the name calling aspect here... In the picture - look at her face - on like a little porn star that they all think they are - but look at the men and BOYS..... how seriously would they take this girl and for how long???? Not quite sure I understand this - is it a fad? Will we go back to Victorian collars up to there to get over this..... P.S. I am glad she is not my daughter and that I don't see my son either.....

Kath

[Stacy A. Foster]

Yes, I like the message in this which is positive. We can all learn from what we've seen fail with others. I've taken a different approach with my daughter than my parents did with me and will hope that she has a great life minus some of the family drama that could have occurred if I didn't learn from some of my parent's mistakes. If the girl in the pic was my daughter we'd definitely have a talk! Although she sure looks like she's having fun. lol

Nice write.
Stacy :)

[O!]

You did take an extreme case to prove how children grow up being embarassed of their parents and actually swearing never wanting to be like them when they grow up, but children tend to do that even if the flaws of the parents arent as mentioned here. Here it ends well, but in many cases children follow their parents footsteps unknowingly, and when they realise what they do, they blame the parents, which is so sad.
Good write asking parents to do a better job.!.

[Jenny Davis]

This is great! It's definitely like a spoken word piece or a rap, there is a message here and I like it...keep writing outside the box, I think it's awesome :)

[Kimmee Jean]

good poem and very true...it is really sad though...cause the reality is so obvious that we dont see it...
Risa Jean

[mattavelli]

haha
you may want to set this one to mature. :)