lol That was pretty funny. ^^ The picture was awesome too because it really helped out the image of the actual vampire rather than having me picture one of those really old vampires from the 1900s... meaning the ones that are not sexy. :P
I think it's really cool that in the first haiku (or stanza) the narrator gets pissed off instead of afraid... that's humor! lmao!
Haha, the beginning of this poem reminds me so much of Shel Silverstein - nice! Now I'm going to be singing that "Oh s**t, I got Bit" line for the next few days.
Thanks for your review of my poem! Yeah, that's pretty much how I feel every day.
WTF? Erm, how should I say it...? Sorry, I can't help it but laughing my a*s off how you wrote the last line...
By the way, I used to play that video game when it first came out on Nintendo, and I mean, the first and the original one... damn, I'm getting far too old for that s**t...
haha! Thanks, I needed to read something cute and short tonight in Senryu format. Also, I love playing those games! That series is incredible and has been around forever...
these are my favorite poems that I have done
Letter To Keira KnightleyA Poem by The Reviewer
Everybody's CrazyA Poem by The Reviewer
Cradle Of Filth - Lilith Immaculate
Dimmu Borgir - Ga.. more..