I like your originality man. From what I hear the game God of War is legit. And to write a poem about a video game is very impressive. I love the last line tpo, it is very apocolyptic (I think I spelled that right) But either way i was impressed that anyone could possibly write a poem about a video game. By the way I do not know how old you are, but you might want to try and write a piece about the old Metal Gear Solid Game for playstation. i think it came out in 1998. I think it is one of the best games ever made. I am 19 too, so I have played alot of games, this might be the ideal game to make a poem about because i think it may be arguably the best plot for a video game ever. I like your style keep it up man.
I've heard a lot about this game. I think I'd like it although I haven't played it. This writing is short and sweet and could have been written into the character description in the game book, or displayed onscreen in the game opening sequences. The pic is very cool.
Lol. This is very good...and...unusal. I played the first God of War [btw, not GOW because that's GEARS OF WAR] and part of the second one. It's a good series. And the demo of the God of War for the PSP looks amazing too.
these are my favorite poems that I have done
Letter To Keira KnightleyA Poem by The Reviewer
Everybody's CrazyA Poem by The Reviewer
Cradle Of Filth - Lilith Immaculate
Dimmu Borgir - Ga.. more..