lonelycomputer.com

electronically lonely

in a room full of drugs

no one to give hugs

so you're looking for love

 

delusional isolation

constant masturbation

crystal meth addiction

a tired old diction

 

Religious prophecies

Bush - S**t theories

dangerous paranoia

False conspiracies

Reviews

[Blackbirdsong]

Every line of this is just real and honest and it gives me chills because there are people out there like you describe. Lots of them actually. Its like this theory a friend and I have about serial killers. They're out there now, they could even be our neighbors. They have that whatever thing that makes them that way only they haven't acted out on it yet. And that thing could be anything because they're psychotic. Okay now I gave myself chills. Great poem. You're really on the money with this one.

[That_Girl]

Wow this is really good. Very true... :/

The poem is very well written. This line just doesn't seem to fit though. "no one to give hugs" It seems to simple a phrase when all of your other lines hold powerful words.

[M.M.]

interesting write

[Nicole Clarice Anna Wie..]

thank you SO much for sending this to me! Simply amazing. I can't really say anything bad about it. I am more or less speachless. Wonderful choice of words, and great flow. Just a powerful piece all in all. Bravo mister reviewer!!!

[E. M. Murren]

Powerful write. I am glad you decided to stay. You would have been missed. Your words ring with truth... especially with this poem. Powerful write.

[Vincent]

wow, governmental action.
we always need some kind of laugh
due to the screwups of the white house.

[Robert Luna]

Speaking more true than you know my friend. Damn the man and the war machine that follows a fool. You never seem to disappoint me in your words.


Wonderfully Done!!!!!

[Stacy A. Foster]

Just don't put me in a room alone with that guy! LOL! And the controversial pic resurfaces again. LOL!!! It is scary that when you talk to people online you don't really know who you're talking to and whether or not they are high, etc. You paint a scary picture here and again, it happens!

Nice.
Stacy

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Right on with this in every line - well written and succinct with a lesson to boot. Great write.
Light,
Siddartha