Expecting Love?

 

 

How can you be expecting love?

When you spread your legs wide

On the first night

I only came for coffee

But you wanted to sleep with me

 

How can you expect me to love?

When you behave this way

All I wanted was to get laid

And you expect me to stay?

I want to go away

 

How can you expect me to love you?

When you easily let me f**k you

What do you expect me to do?

I am not your boyfriend

I don't care if your pregnant

 

How can you be expecting love?

When you gave me your body

So openly and freely

Now you're crying and pleeing

Because I'm not staying

 

Don't expect me to love you

Don't pretend you didn't know

You are only a ho

Who let me 'hit it' low

Now I gots to go

 

Good luck with the baby

I'm sure it wasn't mine

Probably some other dude

Who fucked you too

Reviews

[Steven Williams]

Very harsh, but oh so very true!!! So many people give IT up so fast and then can not comprehend why the person only looks at them like a piece of a*s, but that's what they served themselves up as. If you want love, love first, f**k last right?! Someone needs to say it and I am glad you did. Great write!

~Stephen

[Stephanie]

Quite blunt and to the point. Its too bad there really are girls like that. You got to that point fairly easily I see! Great poem :)

[Amanda-Bodanda]

wow it made me laugh! its so true, if this realy happend then kudos for not staying! hos get what they diserve!

[THE LOST ROSE]

Man i have written poetry very honest and true like this wonderful piece. Where I come from they would say "Preach on brother preach on"! I needed that you are right moment to finish off my night after your Tom Brady poem. Thanks for making an honest poem creative.

[Emily Rose]

Once again, another good idea. It's silly how so many girls complain that no one loves them or wants to be in a long term relationship when they'll "put out" on the first or second date.

Once again, a few small grammatical slip-ups: "Pleeing" should be "pleading" and the "your" in "I don't care if your pregnant" should be "you're."

Good job, once again. Way to run with a good idea!

[Debbie_Philly]

WOW.... glad Im not on that end of the stick...lol... great write though... interesting to see the mans point of view... I liked it !!

[Gandré]

I already reviewed but had to come back to this piece. I love your ethics what you turn upside down so that some don'T understood in the past. I always did. thanks also for reviewing this new pinece "Take down all my detailes" glad you understood. it was a twisting deephly philosophical piece with a small interplay in flirting.

[Brianna Brie]

This is cleverly written from his point of view and love the blocked off color. Strong message done up in style. Great job!

[Kimmee Jean]

wow... really good poem...and very true...that is why i proudly have my v card! i refused to be someone's statistic or prize...love isnt just carnal but emotional and so many other things!

good poem!

[Dave]

Hey, now...don't go bashing them too hard. Sometimes women have that ego complex that they refer to us men as having...you know, the "big dick" complex. I think in women it is called the "vital vagina" complex. Perhaps she just thought you'd think she was the best lay you ever had and wouldn't ever want to leave her?


Thanks for sharing. I liked this one.

[Blackbirdsong]

Wow this is harsh and hurtful, but that's how these situations are...you are telling the truth as it is and I wish more women would figure this stuff out BEFORE they get pregnant or broken-hearted. You said it truthfully here...hope you don't get a lot of heat from certain circles...hey the truth hurts and this is how it is. Well done.