BLUE BALLS

BLUE BALLS A Poem by The Reviewer My fifth acrostic poem.

Warning: This story is rated Mature and may contain material unsuitable for those under the age of 18.

B Belated Explosion

L Liquid Tension

U Unwanted Attention

E  Emotionally Draining

 

B Banallity of waiting

A Angered by the Anguish

L Lasting Forever

L Limped Dick

S Stalled from cumming

 

Reviews

[Stephanie]

Another infamous acrostic...... I think that about covers it! Lol.

[Celtic Cat]

Yes, I could see how evil would be born of such a circumstance! And, hell, fear too!!
You are hysterical. On behalf of all women who ever gave a man blue balls..... I say "we're sorry!"

[Brianna Brie]

LOL...to much info

[Nicole Clarice Anna Wie..]

Oh my oh my! - dare i say more?

[Jet Lag]

funny and imaginative!

[AlleyCat34]

Nice job on this one too..... I notice that some of your poems have a certain "theme" to them shall we say! Wonderful job either way with this one!!!

[Zephyr]

lol
it's an...interesting...poem, for lack of a better word. i think the term "Banallity" only has one L but i don't really know, so i won't say anything for sure.

very funny piece =)

and p.s.- i loved the picture at the end =D

[Diana Owen Busy with Li..]

thiss is to funny...

[TL Boehm]

I haven't read a lot of your work, and leave it to me to pick this one...which is a HILARIOUS acrostic. Not that I am laughing at men in pain. (I have a hubby and two male spawn) but this is great humor here.

[Kimmee Jean]

still loving your work...morning wood i think was better but the last line killed me!
i heart your work!

Risa Jean