So Many Suitors

Warning: This story is rated Mature and may contain material unsuitable for those under the age of 18.

So Many Suitors

for the Maiden's hand

so many take advantage

to be the next husband

 

So Many Suitors

sending so many flowers

some send many dollars

they win with their power

 

So Many Suitors

pretending to be real

their intentions are concealed

but it will be revealed

 

So Many Suitors

take fair maiden to a date

going out very late

but their hearts are fake

 

Too Many Suitors

for maiden to choose from

Many come from different Kingdoms

but she will lose her freedom

 

Many Suitors wanted St. Lucy

Mostly because of her p***y

But she will not give in

She kept her virginity

 

So what is a young maiden to do?

It's hard to hold on to herself and be true

So many lies so much deceit

Who can she believe?

Reviews

[Joel Schwan]

I grew up with 3 sisters and 7 girl cousins ... Needless to say, I was outnumbered. Anyway, I know dating for women can be a struggle, a brutal one at that. It takes a strong will of a woman to resist so many advances, but it also takes a man with open eyes and a strong heart to see that. So nice work! I look forward to reading more.

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

very nicely stated... you truly capture what women since i guess the beginning of time have been dealing with --

[Blackbirdsong]

Dang why is she holding eyeballs on a plate? I'm not Catholic, so I have no clue about the saints and their stories, so wow that pic alone.

Okay so onto the poem itself.

You write with brutal honesty about what many women go through it the dating arena. Then again if this is about saint Lucy, then I'm completely lost. I didn't know that saints were allowed to have suitors. So I learned something here.

As always it was an adventure and a joy to read you.

[Brianna Brie]

Wow, you tell it like it is. I am proud of you for standing up and saying an unpopular, hard thing. Your the bomb! Great poem!

[October]

This was nothing like I expected.
Your style is very unique,
As well as your subject.
But this is well written
and interesting.
Thanks for sharing.