Reminders Of A Broken Heart

I had a bad night last night. Too many terrible things happened. It inspired this poem. Hope you all enjoyed it.

I saw my ex-girlfriend last night
With her new guy
I saw the girl that I liked
So I'm trying to be nice
And try to get to know her
but she put me in the friend zone
Now I go home
and I check online
I made the mistake
Of checking my ex's facebook page
She's now someone's wife
Damn what is wrong with my life?
These are reminders of a broken heart
I feel ripped apart
But perhaps it's my fault
Since maybe there was no spark
But now its the time for me to wipe my tears
I need to move on from here
I pick up the pieces of my heart from the floor
and put it back in my chest
I need to be on my best
And I wont rest
Until my heart is whole again
I'm tired of being just friends
I'll say be my girl instead
Let's go out on a date
If it doesn't work then fine it's great
at least i have my confidence is back
Hopefully the broken heart will just be
Reminders of the past
of a lost loves that was never meant to last

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Wow, this is truly a sad and depressing poem but also very good. I like how it shares a true story and unravels details about your love life and how you feel about your ex-girlfriend and your current crush. The title goes very well along with the poem, I must definitely say. I can relate to this somehow, of course not the married part. Haha. But one time I was texting a guy I liked. He WAS my best guy friend and I dated him once. We were flirting for weeks, and I got grounded for a day or two then got my phone back. I found out that he was already in another relationship. Like wth? His signature on his phone changed all of a sudden when we started texting. It had their initials together with the word "forever" at the end. Urggh! :/ But that's an example of a reminder of the past. Back to your poem, it's well-written and really touches the audience's heart :))

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

this breaks my heart. And I wanted to go out with you. Pencil Pencil. lol j/k. Don't fret you'll be alright. Pat pat. :D :P ---mishel

[Alicia Schroeder]

Bittersweet.. Beautifully done :)

[Soul Fire]

That is amazing,powerful and full of raw,powerful emotion.Excellent job!

[Baby Ricochet]

I've never seen an X with a new bo. I feel fortunate in that

[Persephone]

I've had many a night like this - you've articulated it so well - great job!

[Jordan A. Wilson]

very relate-able. nice work.

[The Random Writings Of ..]

Wow, this is a very different piece that I have read of yours. But I must say I like the emotion that you have expressed here. I am truly sorry about your bad night, and I know that heartache can be a b***h. But writing about it can be an outlet to get it all out. I have to say seeing more of your emotion come out is great. I am glad I have had the pleasure to read this piece of yours. It is a great piece, as all of your pieces are. Thank you for sharing! I hope your day got better! Much love my friend!

[Crazy Cat Man]

thank u. i appreciate your review. im surprised at myself too but i couldnt ignore the negative things around me and I had a slight break down. well i also just posted another sad poem :( hopefully this will all pass

[The Random Writings Of Me..Kates]

It's a great piece! I hope it it pass too :)

[Gothic Girl]

a very sad poem. i admit it's not your usual "cup of tea". nevertheless, your talent in poetry didn't fade. it's still your poetry but without sarcasm and humor. great poem.

[Crazy Cat Man]

thanks. i know...its different....but i cant ignore the negative things around me. so at least i wrote this poem...i wrote another sad one now :( hopefully these bad feelings will pass

[Heather]

heartache beautifully expressed...your struggle with giving your heart out is so clearly written here. Good write about heartache for lost loves and trepidation about new love

[K-mo]

Yet another masterpiece, you have a way with your words, its a very depressing poem but very good