Mourning Palace

A poem for Destinyxi's contest :P

Daylight has finally reached it's end
As evenfall strikes into the sky
Far away in the dark glimpsing moonlight
Sickening souls cry out in pain
Whispering voices summoning screams

Nothing is what it seems
You have lost your dreams
It will never come true
You might as well work in Wallgreens
You're life was a waste of time

What was the point of college?
With all that knowledge
Your life has fallen off the ledge
You're more deader
Than Heath Ledger

Misery Loves company
Stay the hell away from me
If you come close
I'll bury you without remorse
The door is forever closed

As you lay in your own coffin
I will vomit on your remains
As you eternally rest in shame
No one is to blame
Except your own rotten name

No more will I see your face
It has forever been replaced
Your life has been erased
All is left is disgrace
Good riddence is what I say

You will mourn forever
The loss of your life
You no longer put up a fight
Now it's time to end your plight
Close your eyes and wait to die

Artist: Dimmu Borgir
Song: Mourning Palace

Author's Note

Reviews

[Michael Thrower]

Hell yeah!

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

nice. stupor here. you know it hurts. someone really hurt you, but you calm and cry if must, but you'll be ok. sometimes things happen, but don't fret. feeling your hurt. ---mishel

[Beck Louise]

Wow, nice one. Your writing is actually amazing

[CHRIS ANDES]

..is this a song?
coz I clearly hear the melody as I read it
=]

[eglantine]

.... "more deader than heath ledger" too soon? bwhahaha can't help it, it made me laugh

[marlayesterday]

Why don't you tell us how you really feel? Lol you definitely conveyed your disgust succinctly! I like the walgreen's bit....

[Crazy Cat Man]

actually LOL this poem comes from nothing....i followd the rules of a contest and i picked a dark song LOL check it out LOL

[L0v3craft]

gah, i love dimmu and you *_*

-clears throat-

I'm actually beyond words at this point to give you a proper review...and for that i apolo---

*Is distracted by the music video*

[Crazy Cat Man]

Yes. Im also distracted by the video LOL. that was their live performance with a orchestra. I cannot wait for that album to come out. :P

[Baby Ricochet]

Whoever this is about they sure as s**t disapointed you. I get that from the 2nd stanza. I've a personal fear I'm never going to be as great as I was when I was in the Corps so I can relate to the piece. Great job.

[Destinyxi]

Nothing is what it seams >>> seems unless you're actually talking about seams lol

This is freaking gooood hahaha. It's harsh but it's good. I love the cruelty of it, it's drenched in pure and utter anger. Good job!

[Crazy Cat Man]

this poem is inspired by the angry song itself :P perhaps ill write one more poem from a happier song next or a sexy song ;)

[Destinyxi]

Sexy song please haha. There aren't too many of those.

[Crazy Cat Man]

ok. I'll pick another sexy song for u ;)

[Destinyxi]

Haha looking forward to it then

[That_Girl]

Yep! I think brutal would describe this! :) Very nice... loved it from beginning to end.