Eradication Instincts Defined

A poem based on fives lines of any song for a contest.

You worthless piece of s**t
May we all depart from this world
And dissolve into nothingness
Compassion will not be granted
When life's value points below zero

FInally the world is coming to an end
I no longer have to pretend to be a part of it
I always felt used and discarded
I will feel at peace when I'm gone and forgotten
All my feelings are rotten

I was once a man who used to care
Now I am a man who no longer cares
Let the end come and end this despair
I can embrace the darkness
As I draw my last breath

My fears will no longer matter
My hopes never mattered
All that matters is that I never exist
I belong to the dark abyss
I won't be missed

Emptiness fills my soul
My love was gone a long time ago
I've been through this before
Death is about to close his door
On my pitiful life

I feel nothing
As Death is closing in
There is no light
Only a sickening plight
I'm at peace because I'm taking you with me

artist:Dimmu Borgir
song: Eradication Instincts Defined

Author's Note

Reviews

[Destinyxi]

Haha another good poem! =D

[Crazy Cat Man]

hey this wasn't meant to be funny :P i was going along with your contest..this is a dark crazy song i love it..listen to it when u have a chance :D

[Destinyxi]

I know it wasn't meant to be funny, I laughed because I knew it was for my contest and was happy I inspired a poem :P

[Crazy Cat Man]

yes u inspired this poem :D

i might delete my contest. im getting crap mostly :/

[Destinyxi]

Still? Mine is super slow too x.x

[Crazy Cat Man]

im almost done with another poem for your contest :) its gonna be another dark one :-0

[That_Girl]

Incredibly different from what you normally write but damn... I think you should branch out into some darker stuff. Nicely done!

[Crazy Cat Man]

thanks. this got inspired from a contest and I picked this song becuz I love the song and the lyrics. I do have a dark side and I feel good when I listen to dark music and it embraces my misanthropic mood. But very quickly and smile and enjoy life around me and I love to laugh :) but yeah...the lyrics of this song is harsh and I enjoy it for being harsh. We all need to unleash our dark sides in order for our good sides to come out and we love more