My pain

Standing here with blood shot eyes 

Tears running down the cracks on my face

Feeling like I'm shattered into piece of glass

Not feeling any sorrow from your looks

Seeing no sympathy from your voice

Looking at you with no shame

Showing me the pain when I look at you

You just use me but I have yet to find out for what

Pulling me all directions with my emotions

Hurting me with you words

Seeing you with other guys shows me your not trust wrothy

Blew me away when I told you personal secrets

Kept me a secret from everyone

Had my arms open for you 

Let you read me like a open book

But you don't see my pain

My reason for all of the faults in you

Not going to feel your stabs in my heart anymore

When I close my eyes I see your face

Tring to get you out my mind

It's not me its you

I don't care for your tears

Cause' I know they're a lie

So get out my sight or they're will be a fight

Reviews

[Bailey C. Writing]

I'm sorry for whatever you went through, love can be a hard thing to have. You threw everything you had into this piece, obviously. Well written

[Dupree]

You put your emotions so clearly out there. You don't hold back. You let them flow freely. Pouring your heart out to your readers.

[Ruth]

Honestly moving and passionate....the emotions run wild here and this screams! xx

[alexis]

good poem.i liked it a lot.
good job crazo

[Desmund Tiny]

It is a great poem.... ^^,

[Max]

i like how this poem doesn't just tell but it also shows. great job!

[Thea]

Good poem... :)))

[ShadowOfTheDay]

Wow. Really good job! :D

[Alskar]

The odd grammar error, and too succinct in places 'So get out my sight or they're will be a fight'. Forgive me, but that's an incredibly weak ending to an other wise decent poem. A tip I find useful is whenever you're writing about an emotion, try to never use the word of the emotion. Like, when writing about pain, never mention the word pain once. Instead, show us what the pain felt like, how bad it was etc.

[Eli Blayze]

Wow. Good job.Very strong power there,. Keep it up bud :)