Not to be

Maybe it's not true

To be with you 

I've tried to work things out

But you put doubt in my mind

You push me away

When I try to say I love you

Things will never be the same

Because the way you act around me

It's far from being ok

I don't get things you want from me

But at least I try to make you happy

If thats not good enough I gotta say

Get out of my life 

I'n not gonna take it anymore

Your too much to handle

Thorn in my heart

Took my heart and made it fade away

We always fuss and complain

About wanting to stay

But now I don't want you to stay

Reviews

[Bailey C. Writing]

I'm sure everyone's felt like this at some point in time, good write, speaking for the hurt

[Dupree]

Incredible piece. Yet again letting your emotions flow freely on the paper

[alexis]

It sounds like that came straight from your heart and didn't even stop in your mind because it is so good.:)
love is tough.

[Yina]

If that's not good enough I gotta say
Get out of my life
Love that! Sometimes you just gotta speak up for yourself!

[watch_the_world]

I absolutely love this. It kind of reminds me of romeo and juliet Im not entirely sure why but eh :D great write :D

[zoeeyx]

I ADORE THIS, END OF.

[Fairy Willow]

Very nicely done. I like the powerful and emotion to it. It makes me think how i feel at this present time. You really do just take and take as much as you can take and thats it.... Something snaps and you realise enough is enough. Game over we are done! Powerful. Liked it alot. :)

I liked the first half because of the rhyming scheme, but I feel you could switch out some of the repetitive words near the end like "heart" and "stay". The story behind it has been told many times by many others, so it's important to add a hint of uniqueness to it and make it more true to you. I did enjoy this though.

[Thea]

Completely true! Love this... :)))

[Desmund Tiny]

I love it....so powerful emotions...... ^^,