Warrior

He has a heart of a lion

Eyes of the tiger

Quickness of a wolf

Never quitting when the times get rough

Pulling through all the things that try to drag me down

Don't let anyone tell him whats he going to do

Shows everyone wrong when he does the impossible

Supports all military

No one can take him down

Excepts all challenges 

Steps up to the chained beast the drag him down

And now stronger than him and his slaved demons

Reviews

[alexis]

Another amazing writing!
I truly love the beginning

[Nameless]

loved the imagery in the beginning. at first I took 'warrior' as a symbolic representation of a strong spirited individual, in life. but then i got to the line 'supports all military', which kinda gave me a hint lol. i don't support war, but i liked the powerful description and meaning. favourite line, or the one that drew me in: 'He has a heart of a lion' :)

This would make a great spoken word poem in my opinion. A great way to describe a warrior !

[Samith Pich]

Cool imagery mate, very much that of a warrior - i loved the lines:

Don't let anyone tell him whats he going to do
Shows everyone wrong when he does the impossible

that slight rhyme gives the couplet some depth. I think you mean accepts instead of excepts all challenges and in the second last line it should be that instead of 'the'.

Very cool nevertheless

Thanks for sharing

Samith

[Desmund Tiny]

wow.... so nice imagery...... ^.^

[Thea]

Good imagery... :)))

[MsFrazier]

very nice. :d

[Maddie Rae]

This is good. The descriptions of this person are very vivid