Torn

Sitting here

Having so much pain inside and out

Not knowing how much damage you caused me

Tears like blood on the ground

Not able to say I'll be safe

You don't want to see my face

Killing my feelings not able to see my heart

You played with my heart like it was nothing

Showing me you don't care when you just walked away

Feels like I've been torn to shreds

Im like a dust in the wind

Fire burning all the pictures

Wanna just lay in a grave

Not able to sit straight

Cring like my eyesare falling out mt head

Tired of being hurt and played

Reviews

[Dupree]

Yet another brillant piece. People never try to look past the mask to see what they are truly doing to one another

[alexis]

There is a lot of emotion in between the lines.
Another good writing.

[Sethnicity]

... I understand... I would like you to pour more out at a time.... let me show you something. Check your mail.

[Nameless]

there's so much emotion in each line, its like they're bullet firing at the reader, it really emphasizes the importance of each emotion felt by the writer, while writing. nice job.

[Yina]

Tired of being hurt and played
So sad:( You did a beautiful job with writing the feelings of being torn

[misha]

Great write!

[Thea]

Aw, very emotional... :(
But nice poem... :)

[Maddie Rae]

This was very sad but good detail you can feel the pain in the words.

[Fairy Willow]

Deep imagery and strong feeling! Enjoyed reading your words :)

[Suzy Q]

This is going into my favorites. I can really relate to this, there's a few grammatical errors by the way. But other than that, fantastic job.