Anger

Hatred flooding through my soul

Running through my veins

Boiling my blood til  I explode

Not going to keep my feeling in that small bottle anymore

Too much pain and stress you cause me

Firing up my head down to the core of my soul

Testing my patients 

Not telling me that all this is a game to you

My heart full of anger

When I see you many thoughts fill my head

I dread to see you

Thats why I burned all your photos

Broke all your stuff

Not able to see you anymore

If so I'll start a hell war

Not going to take your sh*t anymore

Feeling like you tormented my feeling enough

Showing me you dont care is good enough for me

So stay out of my life cause not dealing with you anymore

Reviews

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ok, you have written 3 poems on the 16 of july, yet two out of the three are all happy and talking about the girl for you, but then why do you have a poem of anger . Your poems are very good but im noticing with your poems it might as look as if you have bipolar feelings in being in a realationship. And now I'm starting to see your patterns and Im figuring it all out now and its making sence to me you were never listening to me when i told you i cared and when we were in a realationship i come to relize that it was all about you and i could never do anything to make you happy and now you are writting lies. That day when you apologized to me and told me you were going to kill yourself, i relize that to you this was a game, and you were making me feel quilty, you were the master mind all along playing with my heart

[Yina]

This has a lot of anger in it, emotions. Many writings are best with real emotion in them. Writing is a great way to get it all out!:)

[Thea]

You really gave a lot of emotion here, great writing!

I agree with micayla4. Also, while reading this, I kept picturing warm colors, like that of fire. Maybe because i associate anger with these colors often/ This is a good write.

[misha]

Harsh and straight to the point. Some of the best writings come from anger. Great job!