Recipe for Disaster

Recipe for Disaster

A Poem by KL

Ingredients:

2 lbs.   disagreements

¼ oz     misunderstanding

1 tbsp.  hatred

4 cups   arguments (heated)

2 cups   diced relationships

1 tsp.   misguided perspective

pinch of oregano





© 2010 KL


Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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Author's Note

KL
Will probably elaborate on this in the future. For now, this is what I have.

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LOL how did I miss this gem..is the oregano optional??

Posted 13 Years Ago


what a very creative way to sum up a crappy relationship..lol, awesome write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Ahhh yes - I have tasted and ..uuhhh even sometimes cooked this meal, ... and let me tell you it leaves quite a bitter taste in one's mouth... maybe with some sugar ... ?! ... But everyone has to find out for himself.

Posted 14 Years Ago


very creative and i really liked the ending - witty.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was really unique, and a pleasure to read. I love the concept of taking "recipe for disaster" literally. The "4 cups arguments (heated)" was great play on words. :)

Definitely looking forward to the elaboration. :)

-Coral-

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is very differant. I can definetly say i havent read anything like this before. I like it though and the originality

Posted 14 Years Ago


brilliant in its simple originality.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I would add denial. A dash.

and paprika instead of oregano.



Posted 14 Years Ago


Clever ending. After enlisting the 'disastrous' 'ingredients', a "pinch of oregano" is just calmly written there.

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow kool....i like it...

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on August 27, 2010
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KL
KL

Vancouver, Canada



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