There definitely can be a fine line between dreams and reality. I love when I slip on my dreams ... B&W is for p*****s ... Favorite phrase: "wear your mirrored mask and reflect your perspective "... This is so timely for me ... I can't let others' decisions about me, sink in... They're usually wrong anyway ... Also, loved the 3rd verse a hell of a lot ... Great philosophical outlook on taking responsibility for yourself and how you either dream away the hours or take those dreams and make them a part of your daily life.. BRAVO, KL! Thanks for the boost!
LLR
The line between dreams and reality, the thin line that everyone has touched. I've touched the line more than a couple, so this poem really speaks to me. I like how the first lines and the last lines go together in a way, yet split in another. I love the vocabulary, the use of different words throughout (something I fail at). Great poem, really.
"there is no magic
no hallucinogenic flower
blossoming in your brain."
second stanza didn't seem to fit it for me, rather blank, otherwise another spirited write, colourful in words and metaphor; especially enjoyed the way you form metre, so visually independant from the linear form and lenght of stanzas. tasteful & with care for poem itself.
Sure is! A great poem hon!
There are many shades between the black and white that devours so called sanity and reality! lol
This is a poignant way of versing that1 Excellent portrayal of the rope slipping, or not, or both! lol
AWESOME!
xx
"If you chase two rabbits, you will lose them both." - Native American saying
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