Worms Eye View

An unlikely poem.

Dirt.
Dirt.
Mud.
Mud.
Grass.
Dirt.
Dirt.
Mud.
Mud.
Grass.
Dirt.
Dirt.
Dirt.
Dirt.
Concrete.

Reviews

[Angel Bird]

At first sight I thought "WHAT is THIS?!?... but then - the last word hit me in the face full force!!! ... and I knew that here, with only these few words you told the whole story of mankind...!!! probably even to their downfall and extinction.

Life was going its peaceful way - instinct and satisfaction reigned - eat or be eaten... everything perfectly balanced by Nature UNTIL the Monster erroneously called Homo Sapiens (Latin: "wise man" or "knowing man") made it's apparition - from there everything is history to us and will soon be to the Universe...

But other than that it also has a funny aspect to the imagery you here genuinely created. Thumb up!

it's like suddenly, finally, hitting rock bottom, haha.

[Bubo]

Unusual!
A view for a worm.........such a dull life.........until you hit concrete and get stomped on, but that's okay.............actually I remember someone saying worms lived for years!

[vincentbals]

Again a poem which can have so many meanings... that's how i love poetry.

You're excellent at this. You're really talented.