In the Darkness No More

A song I wrote.

verse

I want the sunshine

I want the sea

I'd like to see Mars

I'd like the breeze

I see the stars

when you walk with me
just you and me

in the darkness no more

I feel fire

as we go lightspeed

I steal the thunder

as the clouds sleep

I want my days

to feel fine
I'd like to shine

on the surface of the moon

chorus

I will wait for you to walk

so then my self can run (run... run...)

I will wait for you to talk

so then I can see the sun

...your love was spun
when the day was done

verse

I'll take you, world

and all that I see

I'll be your voice

the branch in your tree

the glass on your floor

through centuries
just you and me

cause together we grow

(ch)

bridge:

when the sky was red
on the ocean bed
with Mars to try
the stars came by
I felt your wind
carry me carry I
only ran still I soared
from the darkness, no more

verse

I've got the sunshine

I have the sea

I've got to see Mars

I have your breeze

I am the stars

when you walk with me
just you and me

in the darkness no more




























-klbeaudry

Author's Note

A very, very rough recording of this song can be downloaded here (forget the ending happened, am still playing around with how I want it to sound): http://www.mediafire.com/file/adew1e2zx062pwz/In the Darkness.mp3

Reviews

[L. Spencer]

Amazing. Very nice on the recording, too.

[.]

delightfully sentimental..which works well for a song..especially like the bridge

[Drunken Poet]

a nice song overall~

[Shelby. Loves ya. :3]

wow awesome poem and the music made it even better

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. It moved like good music. Each line making the poem stronger. A very beautiful and positive poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Willow B. Coldfeather]

This is absolutely one of my favorite things I've read on this website so far.
Everything was perfect...
I'm adding this to my library (:

[Forever Mine]

I really enjoyed this.

[RTB]

imagery perfect
flow amazzing,
idea genious
Ur poem outstanding

[Cassiopia Summers]

This is perfect. I really enjoyed it, and it gives an extra happy beat to my hopeless heart. (: Thanks a bunch. I too wonder if you have an idea of the melody.