Miraflor

Miraflor

A Poem by KL
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Watching a sunset in the highlands of Nicaragua, sitting on a swing bench on a coffee farm with no electricity and no running water... just the sounds and sights of the jungle around us.

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Imagine everything you've
ever imagined
captured in an ember
             glow


Golden spires, fading hill
emerald pierced by a
lancing throw

See it, touch it, taste it,
be it
watch the colours
change it slow

Want it, love it, have it,
make it
take what's here and
have it show

through hands and eyes
and nature's soul
not through words in a
painter's bowl
for love is here and love
is whole
and whole is I, so off
I go!






































-klbeaudry,

May 30, 2010

© 2010 KL


Author's Note

KL
Took the pictures for this poem myself, in Miraflor, Nicaragua!

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- - - whole is I - - -

There is nothing more invigorating, restoring, soothing and calming than Nature in its primal state! Since we are all deeply rooted in Nature's soil, for that's the place where we are truly at home and where we find rest.
We should all cherish and value each moment and Mother Nature much more ...

Great picture and a beauty filled poem.


Posted 14 Years Ago


great poem and awesome picture.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love the rhythm to the poem. (= This is a good write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Poem and photo is beautiful. I spend two years in Central American. Your words brought me back to good and quiet nights where there was no electric and little noise to disturb the peace of the night. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is good, and the photograph is excellent. My only real critique is in this first stanza, when you say "Imagine everything you've ever imagined..." I don't like seeing a word repeated, especially when the English language gives you a thousand different ways to say everything. Other than that, this is a nice little paradoxical piece of poetry that captures the feelings conveyed on the writer by Miraflor.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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u kno wut THAT POEM WAS AWSOME ur flow blew my mind i needed a bright poem i been readin to many dark ones i needed it u presented it n i am glad u sent me this read request cuz i loved this poem

Posted 14 Years Ago


"Want it, love it, have it,
make it
take what's here and
have it show"

Love this my friend-and the last verse is supreme!!!

james:-)


Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on July 17, 2010
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KL
KL

Vancouver, Canada



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