Multicoloured Multicolours

Red, Orange, Yellow, Green, Blue, Violet, Black, White, Gold... an artist's pallet of life.

multicoloured multicolours in no fashion fiction scheme

where clouds put on their rainbow ties amidst a rainy dream.

a photo finish flash of sorts when the first page has been flipped

of cherry topped tirades of course when the last stem has been picked.

discovery of time and place and for me it calls my name

no hymn nor verse or blindness curse yet life is not in vain.

and by seeing thinking doing being we have just begun

toss my pennies to some wind take off our shoes and let us run.

because all in all at the end of day I'd rather cross the street

maybe burn on hot cracked pavement and toughen up burnt feet.

'cause yes I have been burnt before but that's nothing to dismiss

for I have seen the lips of Life and given her a kiss

a kiss of thanks a kiss of love a kiss of the years to come

the melody so sweet serene it never need be sung.

yet I've heard the notes and felt the warmth of soundless tones

and through spirit's soulful music learned I'm never truly home...

lest I'm with the free and strong in clouds on up above

where I can don my rainbow tie and be with the Ones I love.























-kl.beaudry
July 15th, 2010

Author's Note

A summation of everything I've learned this year... how to live life.

Reviews

[Miss Coral]

This was an extraordinary piece- I don't think I have ever found a poem to use that word for. "Extraordinary".
But this was excellent, really. The rhyming scheme, in the middle and the end of the lines, tied everything up so nicely and neatly, and yet, I wasn't forced to depend on it at any point in time- and the flow was smooth enough that no punctuation was ever need, a truly rare occurence. The concept behind the piece was excellent as well- as were the use of language and phrasing. Loved it.
I'm never disappointed by the creativity shown in your pieces. :)
Overall, wonderful job here. :)

100/100

[Shelby. Loves ya. :3]

wow i love the detailsin this poem. keep up the good work

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your meter is perfect is this poem, the words skip across the page in a delightful dance..very nice

[GBU POETRY ONLY]

MM is a palette filled with wondrous color and a good ole down to earth lifeforce ... I loved the line: "for I have seen the lips of Life & given her a kiss a kiss of thanks a kiss of love a kiss of the years to come" Great beginning phrase (rainbows) ... There's a lot of poetic phrasing throughout ... 100% Great job, KL!

[RTB]

It was actually colorful very nice :)

[Cassiopia Summers]

Stunning. (: I loved it.

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"discovery of time and place and for me it calls my name
no hymn nor verse or blindness curse yet life is not in vain."
...NICE!!!
..this poem reads very well-very smoothly:-)
--i love the way you placed the phrases together-
....very very creative!:-)
...Great ending line too:-)
"where I can don my rainbow tie and be with the Ones I love."

wonderful poem!!!

james:-)