Multicoloured Multicolours

Red, Orange, Yellow, Green, Blue, Violet, Black, White, Gold... an artist's pallet of life.

multicoloured multicolours in no fashion fiction scheme

where clouds put on their rainbow ties amidst a rainy dream.

a photo finish flash of sorts when the first page has been flipped

of cherry topped tirades of course when the last stem has been picked.

discovery of time and place and for me it calls my name

no hymn nor verse or blindness curse yet life is not in vain.

and by seeing thinking doing being we have just begun

toss my pennies to some wind take off our shoes and let us run.

because all in all at the end of day I'd rather cross the street

maybe burn on hot cracked pavement and toughen up burnt feet.

'cause yes I have been burnt before but that's nothing to dismiss

for I have seen the lips of Life and given her a kiss

a kiss of thanks a kiss of love a kiss of the years to come

the melody so sweet serene it never need be sung.

yet I've heard the notes and felt the warmth of soundless tones

and through spirit's soulful music learned I'm never truly home...

lest I'm with the free and strong in clouds on up above

where I can don my rainbow tie and be with the Ones I love.























-kl.beaudry
July 15th, 2010

Author's Note

A summation of everything I've learned this year... how to live life.

Reviews

[Miss Coral]

This was an extraordinary piece- I don't think I have ever found a poem to use that word for. "Extraordinary".
But this was excellent, really. The rhyming scheme, in the middle and the end of the lines, tied everything up so nicely and neatly, and yet, I wasn't forced to depend on it at any point in time- and the flow was smooth enough that no punctuation was ever need, a truly rare occurence. The concept behind the piece was excellent as well- as were the use of language and phrasing. Loved it.
I'm never disappointed by the creativity shown in your pieces. :)
Overall, wonderful job here. :)

100/100

[Moonflower]

I absolutely loved this, vivid and creative imagery and phrases, an over all wonderful piece, dear.

[Marie Harrison]

Bravo! I enjoyed this whimisical write. The picture goes perfectly with the write too. This is going into my favorite's chest. Thank you for sharing.

[Lilly]

Brilliant poem. Beautiful images and the rhyme scheme adds to the power of the words here. Very beautiful phrases in this also.

[Nova]

This is beautiful. It creates a happy feeling inside. I absolutely love it.

[loowzerX]

wow this is awesome. very original piece of work. I think extraordinary is an understatement. amazing piece. well done! want to see more like this!

[Honestly, Abe]

Normally I cringe from rhyme schemes in poetry, but this piece is an incredible feat of explaining a way of thought that's unexplainable. Genuine, inspired, loaded with imagery that flows through. The rhyme doesn't overpower the poem, and words come natural, instead of seeming forced. What a way of thinking that is remarkably rare these days. Your poetry is always very natural and exploding with emotion, even though the tone may be calm. I love the part about burning your feet. It always seems that you have to experience the worst before you can fully appreciate what you are and what makes that so. Life is a funny fickle thing compared to the legacy you choose to leave, and nothing lasts forever. This is brilliant work!

[Brittany W]

This was beautifully written, i loved the amount of detail you put in this, it was such an amazing piece, great job.

[Artūrs Lūsis]

most of all, I enjoyed the work you've put in putting together the metre for this piece, wonderfully fluent!

first half of the poem seemed far more inspired than 2nd; bit after the burned feet it loses motion, not entirely, of course, but it calms down, out of momentum. it can be viewed twofolded, but i won't go into that now. mostly, there would be a way around usual expressions of fulfilment & life-changing experiences, yet here everything still keeps its balance, showing your interpretion and usual approaches.

it's melodious and energetic, colourful; though first bit 'till 'burnt feet' + the metre - what i found mostly skillful & orginally characteristic, having features solely by you.

thank you!

[Ruth]

Wow!
Quite a philisophical poem love, really profound imagery here~:)
A clever piece that offers a lot of meaning between surreality:)
Wonderful work!
The burning and vividness to the wording and observation is stunning!
Awesome poem
xx

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*clapping* bravo! Wow your rhyme and meter is perfection in this one!!!!
I love it sooooo much..it dances off the tongue and the discriptive phrases is wonderful..

Only one thing that I would change:

and by seeing thinking doing being we have just begun

toss my pennies to some wind take off our shoes and let us run.

if you take out the 'let us' in the second line..it flows even better! :)