With Fire Dancing on the Walls

With Fire Dancing on the Walls

A Poem by KL
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Written in Rio Dulce, Guatemala, in a beautiful hostel hidden amidst mangroves and silent waters.

"

One in one and one in all,

Fire dancing on the walls

with


Fire dancing on the walls


In the trees with grass too tall

Fire dancing on the walls

with


Fire dancing on the walls


Heard my name but missed the call

Fire dancing on the walls

with


Fire dancing on the walls


Heard my name but felt too small

Fire dancing down the halls

One

in

One

and

One in all.
 
 
 
 
-klbeaudry, 2010
 

 

© 2010 KL


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wow. i can imagine how nice that sounds. keep it up!

Posted 14 Years Ago


A beautiful and gentle poem. I bet you are in a beautiful place. i hope one day to be able to wander Central American one more time. Most beautiful and erotic place in this world. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


WFDOTW'S title and reoccurring mantra makes this poem fire up and come alive .. It's got a lyrical flow & the bookend 1st & last lines are profound ... Love the brevity & effortless flow of this piece... Bravo! LLR

(PS: Traveling, huh? ...Good for you.. Wish I had don't more of it at 19)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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KL

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