It Was Just Beyond my Fingers

Eternally feeling you on the fleshy patterns on my fingertips, an epochal sensation stemming millennia - only on human skin. Not necessarily a physical nebula, but a knowledge in knowing that your ferocious fire hangs off a starchain like a portrait. Personal paralysis, blissfully bound to the bounds of bliss, eyes unable to open but seeing everything anyways. Obstinately oblivious to the flies crawling in and out of my mouth, corpus consumed in my love of hell and divine devil spawn. I, the human skin, forever feeling. Even though you literally live over ten million miles above, hanging overhead like a stalactite waiting to fall. Unlike a calcite deposit, however, you would estinguish the world with a whisper in a universe no longer listening. So here I sit, fabricated, body and mind moving consistently forward in an orbit that I played no role in creating. Yet still. Yet still I can feel your beautiful breath on my fingertips, the flies on my face, and everything ensnared in your onslaught of colour.

Reviews

[Lilly]

Liked the aliteration in this - very effective. I found the first and third stanzas very powerful. A really amazing and engaging piece.

[Kesha]

Wonderful work of art! I absolutely enjoyed reading this! :)

[Miss Coral]

Beautiful piece... I love the spontaneous alliteration towards the beginning.
Beautiful imagery as well.
Powerful end.

Great write.

-Coral-

[Shelby. Loves ya. :3]

wow awesome poem!

[Marie Harrison]

Beautiful poem. It was amazing!

[Cassiopia Summers]

Amazing, my favorite lines are...
"Personal paralysis, blissfully bound to the bounds of bliss,
eyes unable to open but seeing everything anyways."

I love how the lines are kinda like the opposites of each other.

[Nova]

This was amazing. I love your poems. It seems like you don't even have to try.

[Sports Girl]

I liked reading this. it was good and well written

[Coyote Poetry]

Your poetry always a pleasure to read. The language in your poetry made it necessary to read a few times. This poem is so beautiful. So many statements stood out. Complete poem is very good. I like the positive ending. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

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laced with sinister almost sexual metaphor ...beautiful imagery..well penned