A Tribute to Dionysus, the Hellfire of the '60s - Part II

For Jim Morrison.

To think I truly forgot
what this is - a lie
& to think I understand
is a myth

finding it increasingly difficult
to keep this pen in my hands
followed with words I
couldn't possibly
understand.

Irrational; irresponsible,
no focus w/extra focus
& thoughts dribble from tongue

doing my best to keep my
spirits alive, in another
world I would
have
died.

problems & complexities
people w/ personalities
forever entwined.

associate with morning breeze
thru parks bench and ocean beach
a synonymous greeting of
affection caressing
your every curve.

It's always busy.
always.
something that shakes me to my center core
something that fills me with uncertain
flavour
something
something that
always.
It's never quiet.

lost a father to brainwash
mirroring myself unto
his f*****g fate.

(a single penned line scribbled, capturing seven minutes of
Riders on the Storm.)

 

Reviews

[Miss Coral]

Honestly, I don't think I got all of this. It was beautiful either way though, and I loved the language, and the way it drew me in. I do think that I missed a lot (perhaps because I should really be going to sleep) but I still liked it. :)
Nice write. c:


-Coral-

The flow is brilliant! Stunning work!

[Ruth]

Great tribute to a fabulous artist :)
Exorcised with passion, understanding and downright brilliance! lol
Cool!
xx

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Flows greatly together, I'm sad it ended, but it was amazing. Great, great job.

[Marie Harrison]

I was really into this write. This is my favorite line:associate with morning breeze
thru parks bench and ocean beach
a synonymous greeting of
affection caressing
your every curve.
Thank you for sharing this poem. It's remarkable!

[Nova]

Very descriptive and draws the reader in. Thank you for sharing.

[Cassiopia Summers]

Very intruiging. Wonderfully written and equally descriptive.

[Kesha]

An intriguing poem! I really did enjoy reading this! Nice write! :)

[Lilly]

An interesting poem - some really great descriptions
Nice work

[Matthew Kult]

I love Jim Morrison. One of my idols and favorite poets.

Regards,

Matthew